It was very disappointing that the story had an abrupt and unconcluding end. There are grammar errors throughout but not so that the comic is unreadable. The beginning was a bit repetitive. The character introductions need to be smoother and distinct in each character’s purpose. Red herrings are fine as well as the barest clues to what is next, but the events need to be sensical and consistent throughout. The comic lacked overall clarity in how characters and events come together to create the plot.