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Passing_Critique

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2021-01-28 JoinedPhilippines
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique8mth
    Commented

    No

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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · Othniel_Seth
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique8mth
    Commented

    skilled

    Is it possible that this unknown Phantom Thief Kid is even stronger than her?
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    DC: Phantom Thief Kid
    Anime & Comics · Sothisq
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique8mth
    Replied to Passing_Critique

    Really? you're asking that? Peter is a vigilante, he is killing people and in the eyes of the law, that is a crime. Not only that, He is also an enhanced/mutate, that means he is a threat to the society if he snap. Hawkeye and black widow are agents, if you don't know why SHIELD don't have problems if they're agents kill, then maybe because it's in their job description and they're allowed to.

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    I Am Peter Parker (MARVEL AU)
    Anime & Comics · ashes_
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique9mth
    Commented

    it's a vampire

    My attention snaps to a grim-faced Tilda Swinton stepping through a shower of gold sparks from a sizable portal.
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    Professor Dovahkiin
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique9mth
    Commented

    It's the god of cocaine.

    {Yes... Come... My first user}.
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    Reborn as Thor!
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique9mth
    Commented

    Thor the god of Coffee

    Coffee acquired!
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    Reborn as Thor!
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique9mth
    Commented

    of the same feather

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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique9mth
    Commented

    *intimidate

    Jory nodded his head and Rody voiced out a request, "My lord, this place is treacherous more than the swamps of the Neck. I implore you to take a personal guard with you. Me and Jory can defend you against the three or four men but you need someone who can intimate your enemies just by seeing him."
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique9mth
    Commented

    you mean *limbs right?

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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique10mth
    Commented

    yes and after seeing the alpha. you would either narrate all the alpha moves like an anime side character or get punched and passed out like yamcha.

    "Since when has anyone ever agreed with technicalities, Scott? Come on, we're going." I didn't listen to anything he had to say as I started the jeep and began tracking Derek, since he'll lead us to wherever Peter, the Alpha, will be 
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    TEEN WOLF: BLOODBORN
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique10mth
    Commented

    dude, did you based her on Mona Lisa? Ahahahah

    "Thank you mommy. I love you!" Jenna said cutely.
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    Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
    TV · Alittlepiggy33
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique1yr
    Replied to Demigod_Patronus

    well. what can I say, there are few fanfics in this site that is worth reading and frankly this one is at the top 5 of my list.

    Ch 11 Sakura-I
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    A Strawberry Hidden in the Leaves
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter man. Quality still great and congratulations on the job and the pay raise.

    Ch 11 Sakura-I
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    A Strawberry Hidden in the Leaves
    Anime & Comics · Demigod_Patronus
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique1yr
    Commented
    "Please." Apollo sighed exasperatedly, "I think she is just talented. Is it so wrong now that one can't just appreciate?"
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    Marvel : Eternal Blazing Sun
    Movies · Eren_fraser
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique1yr
    Replied to DeejaeSutherland

    Man you're a riot, haven't read it but wrote a review on this. How did you even based your rating on this fic? Just curious.

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    Marvel: Infinite Possession
    Anime & Comics · BingeFics
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique1yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter. Man this get better and better.

    Ch 9 Black Zetsu-I
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    A Strawberry Hidden in the Leaves
    Anime & Comics · Demigod_Patronus
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique1yr
    Commented

    Ho, So Sasuke is just like Candice huh?

    Honestly, Kakashi didn't understand Sasuke at all. The best way to make him not rely on the Cursed Seal, was to bitch slap his pride and rub his balls all over it.
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    Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique1yr
    Commented

    Man this just get better and better. Just finished reading this chap and I can't already wait for the next.

    Ch 8 Root
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    A Strawberry Hidden in the Leaves
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique1yr
    Posted

    Current Chapter :32 The story is about an SI who wake up as Spiderman. At first I thought this would be just like "The Spider" by Imjusttryingtofindmyway and to a degree it is similar. The way Peter goes to Baxter, evolving his physique, arsenal and flirting with Susan is similar to how the Spider and this story goes. The difference is that this Peter to a point of view is not really mentally stable. He kills when he can subdue it's opponent. Kills for the heck of it while justifying it with an excuse that it would be better in the long run and I agree. I know this Peter is not a HERO and for a genius he didn't think that killing criminals he encounter would not put a target on his back? That's also the one thing I'm honestly baffled, Peter killed quite a lot of grunts and S.H.I.E.L.D didn't even knock on his door? the mortality rate should be a sign to warrant an investigation but the rumors of a Mutate running around killing criminals should be a code red for them to put manpower on investigating Spiderman identity but there's none of that. The fanfic while good, has its holes, some of it are a bit forced, that luck just falls to to the MC's lap. for example is the Spiders and the tech. Also Reed doing what he did in the chapter 27- 31 is quite an OOC. I don't normally review a fanfic so I might not made this clear and good. I have many things to point out like training and his action on imitating the Creed and how he fails on it but........ nah.

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    I Am Peter Parker (MARVEL AU)
    Anime & Comics · ashes_
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  • Passing_Critique
    Passing_Critique1yr
    Commented

    WAAAGH!s

    "Shut it Ork!"
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    I Am Peter Parker (MARVEL AU)
    Anime & Comics · ashes_
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