Roterro_Done

I mentioned this in one of my previous comments about a request, but it was later deleted, so I decided to delete it too :/ Here's the title without the translation: "Призрак сокола V.1.02.". Author: Motorola

A well-done translation with no apparent use of AI. It's just unclear why the translator didn't provide the original title and author. There are a whole bunch of people in the comments who genuinely think it's an original work. :/

At this point, I certainly wouldn't be surprised if he turns into a human in the next chapter. -_-

All that's left is to give this Subaru a real opportunity to carry out his threats and you can enjoy the show.

Sorry if this sounds rude, but you'd better not count on my help (・・;). I rarely write comments or reviews, especially since I'm not a native English speaker. However, I'm just glad that you're able to continue writing. I'm looking forward to reading the new chapters. :] (But if you need any advice, I think you should add a few more chapters to show the characters' relationships and... stretch out the timeline for the chemistry between them, or something like that :/ The events happen too quickly and abruptly, making it difficult to fully understand the narrative. However, this may only be my personal opinion.)

There are too few chapters to give an adequate assessment, but it's already clear that the idea is good and the execution is excellent. However, like most ambitious projects on this website, I have a feeling that it won't last long. I would love to be wrong, but the statistics speak for themselves. This website is dominated by translations of Chinese works with over 300 chapters, as well as those dedicated to Naruto, One Piece, and other popular titles. In the near future, the author may simply abandon this work due to burnout. Again, I hope I'm wrong this time, but there's little hope. :(

I'd give you cookies for the long-awaited continuation of my favorite read, but I'm just commenting :3

The events are way too drawn out. I've only reached chapter 137, and the plot only gets as far as Halloween with the troll. However, the opposite is also true – too much has happened in two measly months, which would have been enough for a full year at Hogwarts. I don't know if this is a flaw in a fanfic. If you don't mind reading over two thousand chapters, then why not?

The main character is a typical yandere. Only time will tell when he'll start eliminating the "obstacles" on the path to his object of adoration. And I can't wait for that >:D

And who are your Chaos traitors? Eldar courtesans? The Astartes killed anything and everything, anyhow, if it could pose a threat to the Imperium. It wouldn't be hard for them to carry out a full-scale Exterminatus on an entire planet if they detected the complete spread of heresy among the locals... or a complete infestation of Genestealers.