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The events in this chapter are extremely different from the same events we flashbacked from and the first one was better and this chapter is sadly worse as there is no deal like "I save you and you work for me" which you setup a chapter ago. I am a terrible writer but I can give myself a rough plot of this novel and write something better. It's a good premise and idea but bad execution which is sad as it would put off a lot of potential readers possibly 2 in 3
the seasons depend on where you are relative to a source of light.
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So it’s D with classes Cool