Shane_Malema
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Shane_Malema3yrCommentedCh 10 If Only I Could Return To My Mothers Womb- Shane_Malema3yrCommentedCh 5 When Stars Fall
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enthralling, love the way you used the rain & thunder storm to bring in the chills of what the scene was like, such scenes fit in perfectly with the rumbling of heavy clouds
Within minutes, the sound of sirens had drowned out the loud and heavy storm that was pouring outside. The Police and paramedics were all over the house. Cloe who was still barking at the millions of people who were invading her space was eventually handled by one of the police officers and taken out of the house. Still sitting where Mr Crawford had found her, Amelia was approached by a police officer named Jessica Stones. She had previously questioned Mr. Crawford before she got to Amelia. No one knows exactly what he told her, but all that Amelia noticed was that he kept pointing at her and looking her way every few seconds, as if he were suspecting her of the death of her own parents. Honestly, everyone on the scene suspected her, given she was covered in blood and there was no sign of a break in, other than Mr. Crawford who had smashed the kitchen door to enter the house. Jessica slowly knelt down besides Amelia and asked her if they could have a little chat outside.