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20DrachenAuge

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Me...? Not at all a handsome guy | Instagram: @im_arshad20 | Twitter: @im_arshad20 |

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    20DrachenAuge1yr
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    Thank you So Much!

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    😅 That means Webnovel Spirity Awards 2022** I will be moving my novel to participate in that! It will be on webnovel app/site itself, I'll leave the link to that one in the synopsis of this book :))

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    Hey brother! I'm thinking of moving this story to WSA22, So I'm gonna remove this... I wish I recieve your extended support there! I thought I should inform you as you are expecting from me (thanks for that ✨) So yeah, after recieving your reply, I'm gonna delete this...

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    Thank you for reading it till now, I will restart it soon ::)

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    Okay! I'm gonna read until the last and see for it myself! Haha ::)

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    Ly really is amazing, not losing rationality in her mind and what not! So, are you! Your writing is really good, but you can adjust those paragraph like splitting them into 2 or more? That would make it reading more engaging! Your narration is surreal, and you might just tone it down a little bit, and let the characters explain it themselves! Yeah! Keep writing! ::)

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    20DrachenAuge2yr
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    Managing some punctuations, splitting some paragraphs will make it even better! Try to edit them!!!!

    Ch 1 An unpleasant dream
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    That was engaging! Felt like it ended too quickly, haha... But yeah, I found a little awkwardness in your writing style, which improved may prove you best! And why the 5 stars? Becoz I know you would improve your style! Keep Writing!

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    It's beautifully written! (Excluding some grammatic errors here and there). I'm cheering for both You and Emma! Jason is such a sweet heart. And yeah, the chapters can be longer. You are making a break where the mood actually develops, it makes it feel really short. So work on that!! Good Luck!

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    20DrachenAuge2yr
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    Try dividing the paragraphs and add some actions to the speech ::)

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    You can find it under the 'Table of Contents' tab! (On Web)

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    You can find it under the 'Table of Contents' tab! (On Web)

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    You can find it here: Contents —> Volume 0: Auxiliary Volume (On Android)

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    You can find it here: Contents —> Volume 0: Auxiliary Volume (On Android)

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    This is what he meant by lump! That meatball on the head 👇

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    🤔

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    "Apfelschorle" is a half apple juice, mixed with another half of cold carbonated mineral water. (Native to Germany, Swiss, Austria and other countries) It's also called 'Apple Spritzer'! You can search online for recipie ❤️🍎

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    Or maybe at a fork's distance...

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    "Käsespätzle" is a German Cheese Spaetzle (Pasta) Made with Chewy egg noodles oozing with Swiss cheese and topped with butter caramelized onions... Heaven is only at a spoon's distance! 🥚🧀🍝 You can search online for this recipie 😋

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    *Siiiiigh* Honestly... That was the dumbest mistake he could ever make!

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