Forgot to mention this but, later in the story there is quite a bit more typos/grammatical mistakes.

Although the novel starts out with a very good plot with very realistic characters, events and writing quality, it makes a turn for the worst after the 18+ comes into play.Im not talking about the book quickly going downhill , im talking about a ripe apple getting left in the open.The book starts with a very realistic-fantasy novel to a sort of xianxia type novel with the amount of arrogant young masters and face slapping later in the story.With all said, I do recommend you give this novel a try and see for yourself.