Never said anythings wrong with it. Just see a lot of American authors and translators on here isn't it nice to see someone from your own country writing

Finally a book written in English English instead of American English

There's a monster like this in terraria called the eye of cathulu in its second state the eye opens its mouth exactly as you described

Could it be the eyeball or a dragon

reference guess aho-girl

This is a very well written story. Just wondering if you upload less on the weekend or not