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Flying thunder god?
It feels stupid at this point. Their family was the one who antagonized Lathel and they have the audacity to take revenge. I know being a stupid villain is an easy way for a plot but if you actually think rationally, they started the trouble and Amleth did the deed. Is this because they didn't get that Amleth was the one who wiped them out or are they just being irrational and throwing accusations? This feels really frustrating.
People are actively hating on this. It stated from the start that he has the handicap of not being able to 'steal' heroines from the MC. He is constantly warned every time he tries to flirt. He is coping in his mind that he cannot touch those heroines to live. I know it's frustrating but try to look at it in his POV.
The Eminence in Shadow
So.. Writing wheel eyes == Sharingan
Whatever you write, people will like or criticize anyway. As for me, I enjoy your writing. Thank you and have a great break!