Is this fanfic set in prime or cube Omniverse?

I was mostly talking about his/her writing. I am very picky when it comes to writing. I am not saying its bad. Its way better than those AI users spread throughout webnovel fanfiction area. I read till ch 108 and it sucked. As for the ch 4 you showed? I have read till that in past and I quit, but then I decided to give it a second try. I am not a rage quitter, I am pretty chill but I can get very honest in reviews.

I read while not signed in. I logged in just to write this review. Kindly don’t jump to conclusions.

Your writing sucks. Doesn’t make sense. You have poor plot progression and need some work to be done in structuring your writing. What a disappointment. No wonder this is not 4.8 star or kore:

I agree. But since its a fanfiction, author has a creative freedom to change the canon however he sees fit as long as he doesn’t mess up everything.

Ahh the tsundere queen, noice

Honestly she looks way better this way. I would even say she is as beautiful as Strawberry blonde haired girl..forgot her name 😅.

I hope he stays Neutral Evil like the papa bones here…

What alignment Tatsuya would be fit for? Neutral Evil? Or Lawful Evil?

Finally the day one’s going to over.

I miss isUnavailable editor :(

If you think logically, why would Evie Gods not take this opportunity to get rid of Etoulde hods? After all they have been in war for so many years. And someone as evil as Malvazoa, will never become allies with them:

I refuse to believe Evie gods would align with Etoulde gods that easily. Bruh this ain’t some power of friendship bulls**t. Just f***king end this novel already, 99% of the readers are tired of you just stretching it.

The author seems to be a money-hungry individual. Advertising his Patreon at every possible moment. Even his writing style is mediocre at best. Idk why people bother to read this when it is so much different than OG Harry Potter. Trying to entice people with just its name and some characters. If you think I’m a hater, I am not and I don’t even care what you think. I said what I genuinely felt.

I have a strong urge to beat the s**t out of this p**vert.

Greece

Steal Annihilation Maker as well. Imagine all the chaos you can cause for making an army of beings even stronger than God Class beings.

I meant a demon like him but a better villain than him. Lol, you gave a whole list.

Giving this a 2.4 star because I hate the MCs character and personality. So far, all hos actions and motives are pathetically disappointing. Read if you don’t expect much.

Tell me, if a person suddenly starts showing extraordinary talent and become competent and also has animosity with an individual with an authority. Isn’t he a prime suspect for the death of that individual?