Ho rw? ani spoiler chai xaina ta brother...

Improve Little On Character Design Like(Giving Name That shoots the personality of the Character) And also on The World Background.. BTW I Enjoyed a Lot Reading this Novel or Story or anything that you call.. that's Written By a Brother. Thanks A Lot And keep Updating More chapters which are more interesting in Compared to (1-8) Chapter...

Waiting For Ur Next Chapter..

Really Enjoyed Ur Chapters and Concept Of Story Telling While Reading... So Keep up Ur Work..