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Hearth attack? Why? What happens at the start? Someome please tell me.
Makes me remember a certain kinslayer.
İ don't understand how it'll make things smoother but i trust you. You'll make it make sense as we continue further i am sure. And that was the only major problem i had about the fic. Him not being OP just did not make sense because Six Eyes is a cheat. Now it's gone. About Harry's character-i like him. I think there is a lot of room for development. The Halloween will be a wake up call for him i suppose. A reality check of sorts. Which is good. I really like character development. Makes me wonder how he'll turn out as a character. I am sure you won't pull a Jamie Lannister on us. "Innocent or otherwise" remember that? Really invested in this fic right now. But don't feel forced to write. I hate it when a writer loses interest in his book. Keep up the great work.
Just caught up. I don't read HP fics that much so i don't know how it fares compared to the other ones but regardless of that i think this is pretty good. The story is pretty slow paced though and looking at chapter dates your update schedule won't help either. So there is a chance people might get bored. This happened to me with your Dance of the Dragons fic. Even though he was not it Old Valyria for long chapter wise or word count wise thanks to the update stability you have going on it felt extremely boring at some point. While reading i found myself disliking the way you wrote Harry. No that's wrong. It's his strength i don't like. While i like that he isn't a god like sorcerer from the start, because that would get boring pretty fast, he has the Six Eyes. I am not that knowledgeable about Jujutsu kaisen as i have not read the manga neither have i watched the second season of the anime however i do know that Six Eyes is a cheat that makes you extremely strong even at a young age thanks to the comments i have read. So i found myself saying "why is he weak" while reading even though it is better that way because he is not weak he is just not as strong he should be. He will probably get actually strong in a couple of years and while that is ok it will take a long time for that to happen and the wait will kill me which, again, brings me to your update schedule. I loved the way you did the characters. Especially Albus. In the few HO fics ive read he was portrayed as evil. Don't have a problem with that but it got boring and it was just not well written. Tho even if you wrote an evil Albus i believe i would've liked because you are a good writer. And the idea of a mix between Jujutsu Kaisen and Harry Potter words is wuite and enjoyable one. Looking forward to see you go deeper into the role of both these words. I assume they have pretty deep lores. I actually gave Updating Stability a one star but then the review itself becames a four star and this book is too good for a four star review. All in all would recommend. While not one of the best things i have read it has 10 chapters so far so might be by the end of it. This is the longest comment i have written in my 20 years so i wanna see you answer to this.
Just caught up. I don't read HP fics that much so i don't know how it fares compared to the other ones but regardless of that i think this is pretty good. The story is pretty slow paced though and looking at chapter dates your update schedule won't help either. So there is a chance people might get bored. This happened to me with your Dance of the Dragons fic. Even though he was not it Old Valyria for long chapter wise or word count wise thanks to the update stability you have going on it felt extremely boring at some point. While reading i found myself disliking the way you wrote Harry. No that's wrong. It's his strength i don't like. While i like that he isn't a god like sorcerer from the start, because that would get boring pretty fast, he has the Six Eyes. I am not that knowledgeable about Jujutsu kaisen as i have not read the manga neither have i watched the second season of the anime however i do know that Six Eyes is a cheat that makes you extremely strong even at a young age thanks to the comments i have read. So i found myself saying "why is he weak" while reading even though it is better that way because he is not weak he is just not as strong he should be. He will probably get actually strong in a couple of years and while that is ok it will take a long time for that to happen and the wait will kill me which, again, brings me to your update schedule. I loved the way you did the characters. Especially Albus. In the few HO fics ive read he was portrayed as evil. Don't have a problem with that but it got boring and it was just not well written. Tho even if you wrote an evil Albus i believe i would've liked because you are a good writer. And the idea of a mix between Jujutsu Kaisen and Harry Potter words is wuite and enjoyable one. Looking forward to see you go deeper into the role of both these words. I assume they have pretty deep lores. All in all good fic. I will post this in the review section too because i just realized i have been typing for around 5 minutes and this is more of me reviewing the fic then commenting on the chapter. This is the longest comment i have written in my 20 years so i wanna see you answer to this.
fair enough
what kinda bar it that? never drink in a bar where you cant smoke
nah its alright. everyone will be happy as long you keep posting.
3 chapters in a day? someone tell bro to slow down.
you know instead of doing it like this as in giving a number to a certain paragraph and explaining it all the way down explain it there. because scrolling all the way down to read the explanation and then struggling to find the paragraph is extremely annoying. or just use paragraphs comments. other then that liking it so far
tywin that you?
called it.
jon jones?
when he asked about the higher ups i was like yeah this dude is sus. because then i realized if even that green haried girl knows the rumors surely he heard them too. then he said he didn't believe it which justifies in a way why he didn't tell him but still. if we saw more of a akira it would be more impactful. for us of course lil bro is gonna his s..t when he finds out. good chapter. and this reverse cursed stuff. i thought only sukuna and the like could do that. like only cursed spirits. overall good chapter and nice plot twist.