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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro1mth
    Commented

    Hearth attack? Why? What happens at the start? Someome please tell me.

    Author : Just to clarify for those who didn't read Lookism and had a heartattack at the beginning, the character Nomen is like that in canon.
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro1mth
    Commented

    Makes me remember a certain kinslayer.

    "But" Homelander continued "I'm sure everything is alright and it will be a very healthy and 'strong' boy."
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    THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro1mth
    Replied to TheManUnderTheBed

    İ don't understand how it'll make things smoother but i trust you. You'll make it make sense as we continue further i am sure. And that was the only major problem i had about the fic. Him not being OP just did not make sense because Six Eyes is a cheat. Now it's gone. About Harry's character-i like him. I think there is a lot of room for development. The Halloween will be a wake up call for him i suppose. A reality check of sorts. Which is good. I really like character development. Makes me wonder how he'll turn out as a character. I am sure you won't pull a Jamie Lannister on us. "Innocent or otherwise" remember that? Really invested in this fic right now. But don't feel forced to write. I hate it when a writer loses interest in his book. Keep up the great work.

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    Magic, Curses and Gods Amongst Men || HP x JJK
    Anime & Comics · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro1mth
    Posted

    Just caught up. I don't read HP fics that much so i don't know how it fares compared to the other ones but regardless of that i think this is pretty good. The story is pretty slow paced though and looking at chapter dates your update schedule won't help either. So there is a chance people might get bored. This happened to me with your Dance of the Dragons fic. Even though he was not it Old Valyria for long chapter wise or word count wise thanks to the update stability you have going on it felt extremely boring at some point. While reading i found myself disliking the way you wrote Harry. No that's wrong. It's his strength i don't like. While i like that he isn't a god like sorcerer from the start, because that would get boring pretty fast, he has the Six Eyes. I am not that knowledgeable about Jujutsu kaisen as i have not read the manga neither have i watched the second season of the anime however i do know that Six Eyes is a cheat that makes you extremely strong even at a young age thanks to the comments i have read. So i found myself saying "why is he weak" while reading even though it is better that way because he is not weak he is just not as strong he should be. He will probably get actually strong in a couple of years and while that is ok it will take a long time for that to happen and the wait will kill me which, again, brings me to your update schedule. I loved the way you did the characters. Especially Albus. In the few HO fics ive read he was portrayed as evil. Don't have a problem with that but it got boring and it was just not well written. Tho even if you wrote an evil Albus i believe i would've liked because you are a good writer. And the idea of a mix between Jujutsu Kaisen and Harry Potter words is wuite and enjoyable one. Looking forward to see you go deeper into the role of both these words. I assume they have pretty deep lores. I actually gave Updating Stability a one star but then the review itself becames a four star and this book is too good for a four star review. All in all would recommend. While not one of the best things i have read it has 10 chapters so far so might be by the end of it. This is the longest comment i have written in my 20 years so i wanna see you answer to this.

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    Magic, Curses and Gods Amongst Men || HP x JJK
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro1mth
    Commented

    Just caught up. I don't read HP fics that much so i don't know how it fares compared to the other ones but regardless of that i think this is pretty good. The story is pretty slow paced though and looking at chapter dates your update schedule won't help either. So there is a chance people might get bored. This happened to me with your Dance of the Dragons fic. Even though he was not it Old Valyria for long chapter wise or word count wise thanks to the update stability you have going on it felt extremely boring at some point. While reading i found myself disliking the way you wrote Harry. No that's wrong. It's his strength i don't like. While i like that he isn't a god like sorcerer from the start, because that would get boring pretty fast, he has the Six Eyes. I am not that knowledgeable about Jujutsu kaisen as i have not read the manga neither have i watched the second season of the anime however i do know that Six Eyes is a cheat that makes you extremely strong even at a young age thanks to the comments i have read. So i found myself saying "why is he weak" while reading even though it is better that way because he is not weak he is just not as strong he should be. He will probably get actually strong in a couple of years and while that is ok it will take a long time for that to happen and the wait will kill me which, again, brings me to your update schedule. I loved the way you did the characters. Especially Albus. In the few HO fics ive read he was portrayed as evil. Don't have a problem with that but it got boring and it was just not well written. Tho even if you wrote an evil Albus i believe i would've liked because you are a good writer. And the idea of a mix between Jujutsu Kaisen and Harry Potter words is wuite and enjoyable one. Looking forward to see you go deeper into the role of both these words. I assume they have pretty deep lores. All in all good fic. I will post this in the review section too because i just realized i have been typing for around 5 minutes and this is more of me reviewing the fic then commenting on the chapter. This is the longest comment i have written in my 20 years so i wanna see you answer to this.

    Ch 12 Wand
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    Magic, Curses and Gods Amongst Men || HP x JJK
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro1mth
    Commented

    that was really good. tho the slow updates makes me feel like he has been in old valyria for 30 chapters. so bout time this arc ends. hopefully soon. cant wait to see the next chapter. again, hopefully soon.

    Ch 13 Fear cuts deeper than swords
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    Blood and Dragons || House of the Dragon Fic
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Replied to DodgyWriter

    fair enough

    Quickly downing the rest of my drink I said "Sound mate, but only if you tap is wan" already with a fag in his gub he replies "Fine, I'll even jump in for a packet if you want".
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    i was gonna make a review because ive been enjoying reading this. but i decided against it because of the sheer amount of 1 star reviews. figured wouldn't do much of a difference. shame people just do that tho i understand why.

    Ch 225 I can fix her
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    what kinda bar it that? never drink in a bar where you cant smoke

    Quickly downing the rest of my drink I said "Sound mate, but only if you tap is wan" already with a fag in his gub he replies "Fine, I'll even jump in for a packet if you want".
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    nah its alright. everyone will be happy as long you keep posting.

    AN: Yeah, I got no excuse. I have been meaning to post new chapters but I just couldn't focus and actually put words on digital paper. Honestly I just want to apologise and say that there will be more chapters coming soon, I promise. If I am being completely honest my brain had been creating new stories in my head so I couldn't focus on this story. Once again sorry and I hope you enjoy
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    House of the dragon: The Dragon King
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    3 chapters in a day? someone tell bro to slow down.

    Fire
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: The Last Uchiha
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    good fight

    Ch 20 Fushiguro 2
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    you know instead of doing it like this as in giving a number to a certain paragraph and explaining it all the way down explain it there. because scrolling all the way down to read the explanation and then struggling to find the paragraph is extremely annoying. or just use paragraphs comments. other then that liking it so far

    *④: Grissa Roche bears a strong resemblance to Anko Mitarashi with lilac hair.
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    nice chapter and honestly cant wait for the toji fight gonna be sick

    Ch 18 Avenged
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Replied to RewindS

    so by that rationale he might get other sharingan things too then. very good.

    Ch 14 Understand
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    that was genjutsu right? i remember you saying to me that his cursed technique was lightning in a reply. tho you didnt say that was all he was gonna have i think. liked how lil bro owned her there. you dont let anyone talk s..t to your family. and nice chapter

    Ch 14 Understand
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    tywin that you?

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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    called it.

    Jon 'Bones' Jones.
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    jon jones?

    If God ever wanted the create the perfect fighter, it would be him. From the top of his head to the tip of his toes, he was built like the perfect fighter.
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  • Yamastro
    Yamastro2mth
    Commented

    when he asked about the higher ups i was like yeah this dude is sus. because then i realized if even that green haried girl knows the rumors surely he heard them too. then he said he didn't believe it which justifies in a way why he didn't tell him but still. if we saw more of a akira it would be more impactful. for us of course lil bro is gonna his s..t when he finds out. good chapter. and this reverse cursed stuff. i thought only sukuna and the like could do that. like only cursed spirits. overall good chapter and nice plot twist.

    Ch 12 The Lake
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