filllllerrrrrrrrrs wooooooooooo jk

You should get an editor..So many simple proof reading mistakes are being made.

the names are all messed up Roan talking to his son also named Roan lol?

oh look another "two experts" one in a million right ha.....

nah

probably like ever other person he meets. he will be out classed by their development being magically better than Michael's own.

am i the only one that is about to drop this book? where did all the good writing go. this arc has been so long and kinda dumb.. feels like a very forced elation ship between moonie and MC... just to drag things out a little longer.

like how many times can peoples genders change in this story… really need to clean up the he/ she’s correctly

is Ling a she or a he…..pick one and stop changing it ever other paragraph.……………

You really need to separate the parts flash backs and the main story better…. This is getting annoying trying to remember what actually going on in the story

Thanks for the chapter

Love a good time skip! Thanks for the chapter

Enjoying the novel so far but p.a.c.i.n.g

You can delete chapters and not make people pay but nah that’ to much work

Move on…..

I like the story but can you stop adding useless filler to yo word count before and after every single chapter……………

And dropped

And more filler… yay

Lol might as well copy and paste some more stats to take up word count again… oh wait you did yay

Why do you re-write the end of last chapter very new chapter…waste of my time to re read something I literally just read 10 seconds ago.