treeshowers
Lv1
2021-01-26 JoinedGlobal
-h
of reading
6
Read books
Badges
3Moments
13
treeshowers3yrCommentedThis whole chapter is breathtaking. Wow. I smile so much my cheeks hurt.
This paragraph has been deleted.- treeshowers3yrCommented
Aww..my heart
This paragraph has been deleted. - treeshowers3yrCommented
Lol
She grabbed her stuff and stomped on Rebecca's feet before walking off. Rebecca howled in pain while Ryan, who had been watching them from a distance, chuckled. "This is going to be fun," he said to himself. - treeshowers3yrCommented"Z," whispered Ryan, and hearing him call her Z melted her bones. "Keep saying it."
- treeshowers3yrCommented
Yep, what a way to celebrate your 16th birthday.
"Cool. So, Zara, I spoiled your birthday, but we still have time. If you permit, I want to make it up to you. I promise to be on my best behavior." - treeshowers3yrCommented
Ya, seriously Z?
Ryan looked as if someone had punched him in the gut. He looked crestfallen and only said, "I know" before leaving. - treeshowers3yrCommented
Way to go Ryan. Woohoo!!
Ryan turned to Zara, "Oh, yes! I made friends today, Veronica and Zara." He pointed at the two girls. - treeshowers3yrCommented
Wow..just wow
Veronica stared at him, open-mouthed. He was hot. Smoking hot! He was the very definition of hot. He was well over six feet, and his clothes did an abysmal job of hiding his magnificent body. He was smiling, and his hair was dark black in contrast to his skin. However, his most prominent feature for Zara was his eyes. They were the color of the ocean; deep blue, stormy, and enticing. For the first time since morning, Zara couldn't disagree with her best friend, who was going weak in her knees. Veronica looked at Zara as if to say 'Told you' before stepping out of her car. - treeshowers3yrCommented
I also want such a nice birthday present.
Veronica slyly remarked, "He could be your birthday present." - treeshowers3yrCommented
Finally..gimme gimme gimme
He was a blue-eyed boy who erased the memory of the note from Zara's mind. He ensured that Zara wouldn't remember the incident when she got up from sleep in the morning. - treeshowers3yrCommented
2 deaths in 2 consecutive chapters? I am blown away..
The dark figure had no shadow and moved with serpentine grace. It asked, "Where is she?" in an eerily calm tone that sent the old woman shivering though it was not from the cold but fear that crept through her bones. She spat and uttered, "On my dead body." The dark figure smirked and said, "Regrettable choice of words," before sending a knife straight into the witch's heart. It stepped over the dead body and scanned the horizon, calculating its next move. - treeshowers3yrCommented
Oh no, where did she go?
"She will be fine. I have done what I can, now let me know what best can you offer?" - treeshowers3yrCommented
Whoa..you killing someone in the first chapter..? Now I want to know who that girl was
Gabriel said sadly, "I'm sorry, child. Her journey has already begun."