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okaynowwhatyouwant3yrPostedI can’t explain how a measly four chapters from this novel can truly grab my interest. The writing is fantastic, and I love the first-person perspective. I adore how the characters feel alive, and even if they had little to no time to reveal themselves, I can just imagine and predict what will happen next. The magic system is greatly explained, and I personally think this story has true potential on becoming something greater. I highly recommend to you to read the first four chapters. I have been a fan of Jobless Reincarnation, and seeing that other’s are trying to follow the same concept, it really warms my heart. So far, there is no scenes I dislike, and I can just see this rising to the top. I am so eager to see both Daskin and Teriana growing up. But time will tell what would happen next. I hope this gets translated to different languages someday. This is a potential Scarlett if it continues where it’s going. Hopefully, this story gets more attention from the author.
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I love this.
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This is a really unique magic system. I adore it.
"Now Daskin… construct your 'forest', and when your mind feels like you're ready: raise your palm in front of you and let Wind brush against the center of your palm. That way, with the combinations of both wind and nature; and the strong energy of your mind, it will merge and slowly summon an object, being, animal, or person from the very center of your tiny little hands. When your mind evolves; the requirements will decrease. And you would be able to form the 'forest' in your mind in mere seconds." - okaynowwhatyouwant3yrCommented
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"Dear gods, please don't take those two angels. They don't deserve to have pain released to them. They're caring, they're lovable, and selfless. Please children of the gods, might you assist our souls and release repentance for my sins and theirs. They're young, and I can see that in both of their hearts, a strong power resonates deep within their souls. So please, I beg of you gods, please I pray for your forgiveness." - okaynowwhatyouwant3yrCommented
Why can I imagine this in my head so clearly?
But seeing the most attractive maid, hiding me under her arms and legs, was both a treat and a certain side of pain. Now I have to see her face, fallen into fear. It just makes things a lot worse. - okaynowwhatyouwant3yrCommented
Oh my, what a twist! Too bad that it came to this though. It’s oddly realistic.. in some points.
It appears that my mother was stealing goods, along with currency during the past years we lived with her, just to keep us safe and well-fed. I seriously don't understand her motives, but it really dealt a significant pain in my heart that I finally got told about her actions. Even in a different world, no one can be perfect. And this presents that motive, clearly. - okaynowwhatyouwant3yrCommented
Free adoption.
"Let's say... I take you to my house? Surely it's much better than the wilderness. I can feed you, take care of you, and educate you when you age. I can give both of you relationship advice near the future, as you are both Soulmates. Aww, I can't wait to see you two grow up together." - okaynowwhatyouwant3yrCommented
No!!
I could see that they had thick grey fur and long sharp teeth. The wolves don't look like any of the kind on Earth, thus enforcing the idea that this world is a fantasy world. - okaynowwhatyouwant3yrCommented
Ah yes, weakness. This shows how vulnerable toddlers can be.
Two hours have passed, and somehow we are both alive in the wilderness. Teriana stopped crying, and I was beyond afraid. What can I do? I'm a newborn child, I can't do anything. - okaynowwhatyouwant3yrCommented
Yikes, that wouldn’t be great.
Please... don't kill us. Don't be vultures. - okaynowwhatyouwant3yrReplied to okaynowwhatyouwant
- okaynowwhatyouwant3yrPosted
7 Chapters before the actual fantasy? Well, even though it's long, I really like the characters. I like how there are actions and explanations. I generally don't like "fantasy transported t another world type novels" but this is like a novel that's aware of itself. And it knows what it's doing. It's unique and creative, but it also lacks updates.