Also forgot to add if I was doing a review swap with you, I will try to get to it but it's been busy so it won't be done till awhile.

ehm... I have seen quite an amount of people do this. Hello! Shameless review by the Author how you guys enjoying this so far. I think I did that right did I? Anyways "REAL TALK" so I was going to upload a chapter each day but I can not physically nor mentally do that. I am going to try 3-8 chapters a week. Also wouldn not mind if I had some paragraph comments for what could be done better. If it is not too much to ask anyways thanks.

It's good I think I would feel very satisfied by the time I finished the end of this story. I'm not too judgy unless I have to, but I like having a fun time and reading books without being nick picky gives this a 5.

TL;DR: In the process of steadily learning a good amount of languages to a proficient level until I got emotional hurt and stopped for a little bit. Hmm let us see I grew up in California with many native Spanish speakers so of course, I had to learn Spanish first. I didn't really like spanish since people around me pushed it too much on instead of letting me learn the ones I want(I still like the language). Eventually, I did get into learning languages including most of the common ones(until someone who I was close to became very discouraging to me about it). I learned up to a proficient level of maybe a level 1 or 2(meaning I could understand the way the word was being said and I could speak with a somewhat native accent for most.) I've just recently gotten back on it since I didn't have time before, but now it's been steady. Languages in total that I tried before a personal problem occurred. Spanish, french, german, Russian, tagalog, polish, greek, hebrew, Japanese, korean, Chinese, arabic, hindu. swahili, and a few more I can't remember. TL;DR: In the process of steadily learning a good amount of languages to a proficient level until I got emotional hurt and stopped for a little bit.

Very good(this is my nonjudge face) a story I would read over many others. Wasn't too hard to read felt like a nice appetizer. Might even be something I would reread.

We're getting there haha.

interesting

Which languages and how proficient are you in each one. Also I do want to speak a lot of languages too since it just feels great to converse in them. Though people do get disgusted of the languages I do like the most.(russian and german I just somehow like them also hebrew)

Yeah the grammar errors were a big thing mostly because of the fact; I hadn't done any proof reading I did a little bit of editing but that was it. Even now I'm sending this message without remembering any writing rules. The format was weird in my opinion since it was different from how I used to write things.

Thanks I'm trying to update constantly, but it's not a guarantee. Along with my power going out last night it's already becoming a little hard to handle.

Yeah I made it confusing in the beginning during the next chapters it will give some light on the status, ideas, land, and somewhat of the leveling system. But, there will be a lot of questions since the Main character is just as confused.

heh yeah, I just really wrote this on the fly even the story idea I had only gotten the day I started writing. My first idea was completely different and my second the same.(I'm going to saves those for later)

I mean your not wrong I wasn't planning on making this a serious thing unless it seemed somewhat good. At the moment I have too many things on my hand, but I wanted to do writing as a hobby. I couldn't really be doing too much editing or proofreading, but the days aren't that hard I can't. If I had to say I mentally tired so for the first two chapters I didn't do anything besides some sleazy sound effects/onomatopoeia. Next chapters I am going to put some more effort into it. Grammatical errors were a lack of proofread and effort, I know where I'm going with the idea, so upcoming chapters will be better I promise anyway thank you.

True I got a little lazy during some parts and just used an onomatopoeia. You won't really see it in the other chapters too much though and an explanation that will give a better picture.

same thing as the click-click part I just lazy hand it instead of better explaining

Yeah, I went a little lazy with the onomatopoeias and sound effects. It was supposed to be a keyboard or keypad, but I just lazy hand it.

Yeah in the original synopsis it did say it was going to be slow and confusing at the beginning. The next chapter will explain some things a little better one reason for some of the story be hard to grasp is because Vince is just as confused about what is going on behind the scenes.

Um let's see where to begin...I could only read one chapter today but out of most of the ones I've actually put my reviewing glasses on this is the best or close to the best one. I don't really give complete five stars if i'm being serious, but if I'm not doing that it's a five star. I'll have to make some time, but this will be on list to read first.

Hmm let's see I felt it connected mostly because I do like school settings. The synopsis was quite good describing not just one way to get a power, but many others that are almost the same which I feel more novels should reference to. The interaction between characters seemed natural and I liked the little reference to masculine and feminine article. I am quite a language geek and do love to see those little things. So far pretty good.

The first chapter explained the cultivating system in the solid way not seeing anything that will make me give 3 stars or lower. I do love my cultivation here and there although they can be hard to explained in just words but not impossible. Rating might change but maybe not I won't give something higher than a 4.5 unless it just really connected. I'll keep reading to see where this goes