It's not konoha, otherwise they'd have a blood feud with the cloud village that would never result in a ceasefire agreement, where they then tried to kidnap hinata but shamelessly demanded the hyuga patriarch for the death of a cannon fodder jonin, since the majority of the 10k ninjas died. I always assumed it was a coalition front between mist, stone, and sand. No way any singular village has 10k ninjas to throw at a single battle front.

This is beyond 'op'. It's a straight up multi-cheat skill all for being a dumbarse. If this is how you 'punish' a character's mistakes, I don't really want to see what rewards for actual accomplishments would be. I'mma just put reading this series back on pause, til I'm in the mood for bs power fantasy.

This was a sloppy chapter. Extremely forceful author's hand. If you needed an 'op skill' this was one of the worst ways of doing it(top worst would be random gacha with uber mega lucky jackpot or whatever bs certain novels love doing). The mc suddenly regressed in mentality, then the flashback was cringe(dude's literally been in the city for what a single day? but somehow all the little actions are super important core memories now as if they're what changed their life or was the 'heroes call to action' scene, it just ruins the original core memories to even begin trying to put them on the same level as something he spent 3 years drowning in recollections of), and the over dramatic bleed out and terrible response(it feels like this was meant to be the original start of the novel or something). The story was going so well too, but now it feels like it restarted without warning. I've heard great things about this story though so one or two speed bumps are fine, just felt like ranting about something so stupid.

Wow, such effort, defintely needed a new op skill to pull that off. Yep so much harder to eat a bean than getting up to lean against a wall bleeding everywhere and slowly falling for dramatic effect.

Obviously not as bad as him, but imagine a kid wanting to grow out their hair and your guardians secretly tell the barber to practically shave it all off on 'accident'...pretty sure that was THE moment I grew an inherrent distrust for all adults(the gig was up when I flat out told the barber he owed me money for ruining my hair but my guardians paid him anyways, you don't pay someone if they 'messed' up by shaving you near bald when you specifically asked for just a trim). The second moment was when they strongarmed me into getting a haircut at home...I stopped caring about my hair after that. Funny part? They yelled at me because I went to school with a butchered haircut, because it made them look bad...beach you cut my hair while drunk how's it my fault you didn't fix your mistake? I think the best part out that last fiasco was they never took me to get a hair cut again...yeah they ended up full blown neglectful, but the independence was a welcomed peace period after years of them. As it stands now, my hair is what 3 feet long now? More than 2 less than 3 I think for the bulk of it at least, don't feel like undoing my hairties. I love having long hair despite the hassle, amazing fidgeting outlet and it's somehow spiritually soothing to have a 'rebellious' mark of pride as a constant companion piece.

There's this series about a transmigrator into a game type deal, the 'tutorial' island or whatever ended up still existing, but everything in that place is indestructible...so obviously the mc took everything no bolted down and left a couple things in case another transmigrator showed up. Made an indestructible cape using a futon...and various other things of use like forever candles and what not.

Wow, using the site rating system dropped this a lot lower than I thought. I was thinking more so 3~3.5 star. - Great tl quality probs the best you'll see in a while. - It hasn't been updated in a while and for some reason the latest chapter for a while is about deleting books on this site. - Story is hot garbage that's gilded to look decent, it loves to smash the canon story but then at the last minute cram it back in to the plot because the author is too lazy to actually make it an au. - The characters would've been a nice point, but the mc is a mess of blurred motivations and abilities, the moment you think you understand them they just change or pull something out of their arse inexplicably. The other characters at time react organically and seem as if they'll develop beyond their canon versions only to flat out revert as if they've never experienced anything new. Also...the mc is an oc(?) but acts like an old man(?) sometimes(?) with a transmigrators mindset(?) but has no knowledge of the canon(?) and inexplicably has supreme magical prowess to be able to cast all sorts of magic wandless...without training...I mean he's literally 11yo and there's a scene when he went to play something 'emotional' on the piano, he suddenly became a godlike virtuoso directly transmitting his emotions to a bunch of old people who preempted it with 'haven't played piano in a 'really' long time'...it's so confusing, is he a kid or what?! - The background would've been amazing but the plot keeps zigzagging to the point you doubt what'll happen next, not because of a plottwist but a backbreaking twist in logic that'll 180 undoing all the progress in the story only to eventually teleport to the resolution that was the originally projected destination. Imagine you get on a train, it derails to a branching destination, magically flips around and goes back towards the departure only to slam into a portal that takes you to the original destination before the derailing. This fanfic has a weird obsession with trashing the original canon, try to change it only to reverse in full gear and then magically follow the canon again. - Latest part of the story, part way through chamber of secrets arc, I read used some decent mental work to justify everything and came to the correct answer then within a single chapter flip flopped to a hairbrained idea that was literally just debunked because...the mc had a change of mind. I swear the mc has split personality or something. I mean yes the new theory has it's own supporting facts, like how would a basilisk travel without extra large conspicuous sewage pipes, but then again it was taken for granted without ever checking if the 'pipes' are actually suspiciously large...like at all. Instead it must be some other creature that has instant death gaze(why that's still a solid clue when basilisk would be 'impossible' idk) but petrifies from indirect contact(puddles and camera) and can somehow sneak around the castle without alerting anyone or be caught by the countless paintings(surveilance cameras and norris?). - In conclusion? It feels like a melting pot of a story where the 'choose your own adventure' point got merged into the same plot and despite all the contradictions for some reason follows the canon plot. Like a visual novel where all the choices were chosen at the same time, characters will develop and revert on a whim and suddenly continue developing then suddenly change and develop in that direction only to flop back to the original growth and etc. It's a confusing mess when you try to think too deeply, which unfortunately is what I do subconsciously. So...if you can turn off your critical thinking, this would be a fine and dandy story to read. Hence my original 3~3.5 star despite the site's harsher criteria rating. There's no concept/ingenuity or 'funness' category which I feel bumps up the rating a bit. I would've loved to keep reading, but my mind can't mesh with it and it requires me to change a fundamental reading process I've been training for ages.

I was just fed up with the wannabe edgelord. Can't even remember the details, I just know that the mc has selective memory loss. Bellatrix may have been minister for a decade, but it still took a while to clear up all the corruption. Sirius probably took a few years to get out of azkaban since Bellatrix started off slow before snowballing into her current power of influence. I also don't remember the extent of Rose's backstory, but I think it was implied to have been more rough than the canon version, which from what I hear was about as bad as it can get without escaping pg/teen rating. So I'd assume at least a couple broken bones, starvation and dehydration here or there, and the psychological stuff like verbal or other non-physical abuse(imo the worst kind since it's literally lifelong ptsd).

It's too much work to dig through, but I remember during his wish it had periods in between each 'power' so...he made a single wish despite breaking it up into multiple sentences. If the god or whoever specifically made stipulations to prevent 'smart' people from abusing the semantics, they would've also cut off the mc after speaking of the 3 people's powers since it wasn't within a single wish but multiple statements. Someone taking advantage of semantics like this would've been shut down for semantics as well. Also...if you're going to wish for multiple people's powers altogether at once, then it's pretty stupid to stop at just 3 people when you have 3 wishes. But like I said in the original, a genie who's used to people trying to wriggle their way into more wishes would've just shut up the mc after 3 sentences each with their own 'wish'.

So...I'm guessing taxes don't exist then. If he's going to blow away all his money that was left after the system tax as if he doesn't have to pay the village taxes.

It was pretty stupid to start selling it without checking the system price. What if it actually cost 50ryo each? He'd be losing 5x the money.

"Small"...sure

You went so far into scientific reasoning you skipped an entire section and pulled up a semi-related issue that would've been a major issue. The reason for rejection is the immune system and not genetics. Unless you're transferring the immune system to the clone, they should have their own completely isolated version formed from growing in a test tube. I'm guessing this whole debacle originates from hashirama cell's innate ability to overtake any body it's injected into, but you also have to keep in mind the reason that's 'possible' is because they're unnaturally full of vigor and life from the senju bloodline+sage energy. It's as if every hashirama cell might as well be a super stem cell, which comes complete with all the genetic info to recreate hashirama wolverine style(which was in of itself a half-arsed method the author used to explain why he didn't develop cancer nonstop like deadpool yet anyone else basically forms a new hashirama on their body). Essentially hashirama cells are a cancer that naturally tries to recreate a full hashirama, explaining why even madara had his face growing on his body. I mean you try to survive having a siamese twin suddenly grow from inside your own body in the for a hashirama without your own body have a meltdown.

Increased by 5mil for his black market bingo; the official bingo was at 20mil and the unofficial was at 25mil.

Hundreds of explosions going off under a tree for just touching it, clearly not intended to harm the person who touched it...not suspicious at all that there might've been something important underground. Set up a perimeter and a bunch of seals to record the chakra of anyone that passes by. Have a swathe of sensor ninjas compare and match the specific chakra and poof you have someone you can interrogate for about why they were snooping around a secret hideout built near the barrier seal.

Dafuq? He can push/pull a spirit of moryo or whatever who had at minimum the chakra levels of a tailed beast. The hell you mean he can't affect someone who's semi-permeable? It's already confirmed he doesn't need to target something tangible, he just needs to 'see' it to use his power. I'd love to see obito deal with being shoved into the ground and being forced to teleport away or else become tangible whilst something is inside him.

It's so like Danzo to persecute war heroes, probably because he's a fake one and can't stand the real ones. It's also so like Hiruzen to just let it happen. What I can't understand however is how there never seems to be any commentary or repercussions towards them from the council meetings for so blatantly targeting and tearing down their village's best so consistently.

Seriously a deux ex machina? Could've just overdrafted chakra and created an unending shadow clone army. Escape would be hella easy when you outmatch everyone in taijutsu, plus I doubt they'd be able to handle a hundred revolving heavens going off at the same time. So it's hella easy to wipe them out instead of just escaping.

Well...that was a pretty stupid command. The anbu's identity although an open secret shouldn't be blatantly pointed out like this. Now everyone knows that the only ninjas that didn't move are definitely in anbu. The command should've been for everyone to disperse and for the anbu to return after donning their uniforms/mask. Only the top most performers would have their identity exposed since it's impossible to hide their trademark moves/styles, but the rest should be still hidden from potential spies. It's not much of a 'secret force' if everyone knew who each member was. Hell the most natural command should have been a secret sign for the anbu to reconvene after leaving alongside everyone else, so that people won't be on the look out for any shinobi not out and about collecting supplies/preparing for departure. Spies would be able to figure out who's anbu via process of elimination if they heard all anbu were summoned, or if the person they're scouting suddenly goes back and forth after a meeting for jonin and then anbu.

For those who can't read it, it's basically the wiki entry for Might Guy, his moniker is "Konoha's sublime Green/Blue Beast of Prey". Either scenario makes sense when you consider his eight gates opening is colored blue or green based on the artist's mood. Arguing it needs to be green because of his outfit kind of skips the whole point that he earned his moniker from the technique not his image. Also the japanese version of his title is 'aoi', in japan it's typically blue but the series takes it more as 'azure'(who's spectrum goes from blue to teal/greenish-blue), so it's not helping with narrowing it down between blue/green when some shots have it blue and others green or even straight up both ends of the spectrum at the same time.