I feel like it's very slow, you've gone through 54 chapters and it's only the first day, you haven't even advanced to the first chapter of the series, it's tiring to see that it doesn't continue.

There are only 5 chapters so I can't say much, but it's going very well for now, the character of L feels very well captured, as a recommendation it would be good if more death note characters appear

The world record is 9.58 seconds, for a 15-year-old boy to be 0.50 seconds away is not too much?

south america?

Gerd Müller was a prominent German striker known for his lethality in front of goal and his key role in the German national team in the 1970s, including victory in the 1974 World Cup. He is one of the greatest scorers in history and shone at Bayern Munich. Franz Beckenbauer, nicknamed "The Kaiser", was a German defender and midfielder who also led the national team in the 1970s. In addition to his successes in the World Cup, Beckenbauer stood out for his elegance in play and vision. strategic of him. He also played an important role at Bayern Munich as a player and coach. Both are legends of German football.

It is literally the same thing that happens in this novel "Bleach: Secret Intentions", they are similar but you developed your novel much better

Are you going to introduce the other zaun champions? like blitzcrank, dr. world, janna, twitch, zigg, zac, etc?

the best league of legends novel, it covers the entire world of lol, it has very good interactions with the team, a very clear purpose, the fights are good and a very well done structure, romance, I give it 9/10 because I still don't know term

It is impossible for 6000 ninja to go undetected, they are simply too large to go unnoticed.

I really liked the story, I seriously recommend it, his technique is very interesting, how he uses it, his relationship with Maki and Mai, I like how he becomes stronger little by little, how he takes advantage of heavenly pacts and restrictions. the best jujutsu kaisen fanfic

It is a story that is going well (chap 42), but it would be good if he had some ambition, the MC is just living and getting stronger, a dream or something would be great if he had

Yes, they said it, the death of the Z warriors, more specifically that of Piccolo, made him reach the super saiyan

It's very interesting, geto's powers in bleach fit perfectly, you have to develop it very well but it interests me a lot, it's the only geto story in bleach, I hope you continue it. For now I give you three stars, if it improves I'll upload it

if iraq won all three of their games they would be first, and bangladesh too, it doesn't make sense for them to face each other, the first has to go against the second or the best third

if iraq won all three of their games they would be first, and bangladesh too, it doesn't make sense for them to face each other, the first has to go against the second or the best third

a pity the injuries, he had a lot of potential

The King's Haki relies on an individual's willpower and determination. those with fierce ambition and exceptionally strong will have a better chance of developing and mastering the King's Haki. Through challenging experiences and intense battles, a character can awaken and enhance his ability to use this form of Haki. A notable example is One Piece protagonist Monkey D. Luffy. Initially, Luffy had no knowledge of or control over the King's Haki. However, as he progressed on his journey and faced increasingly difficult challenges, his ambition and determination grew. This helped him develop and use the King's Haki in critical situations. In short, while some characters may have a head start, the King's Haki is not exclusive to those born with it. It can be developed with strong ambition, proper training, and facing challenges that test the individual's will.

when sakumo commits suicide, kakashi hadn't even graduated, that is, he was 5 years old and in the battle of the kanabi bridge he was 12 or 13 years old, are you going to tell me that you're going to extend the war for at least 8 years?

"the blind swordsman" and "the dream to immortality"

"the blind swordsman" and "the dream to immortality"