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Bro, I know you are cooking buuuuut, you are loosing me here. I'm here for the MC, you can just give me a blurb about the background and world building, and that should be enough. This reminds me of the first few chapters when you showed us the SAME thing but from Orm and Orins pov, I think it was 2 chapters of that, it was interesting but unnecessary IMO
Good luck? or just luck?
...How can he not believe that the son of the Hokage with Uzamaki lineage can't match him??? This is just reaching for plot
Eight or eighty?
This is almost half the chapter...