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Void_11221yrCommentedyou should remove that line
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i'll go *
Oh, fine ill goes thank her. - Void_11221yrCommented
i'll*
And If I wanted to do my job ill have to make sure to be stronger than them. - Void_11221yrCommented
to me by Ben*
So, Of the forty-something rings given to me Ben. - Void_11221yrCommented
..hero.and the guild master of..*
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seeing*
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deny that it was yours*
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kicked him in the stomach*
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begin not being
"Now my dear audience, the last and final match of this tournament is about to being," said the announcer. - Void_11221yrCommented
I don't (know) if you've seen him
"Exactly, if you do things that way then it'll be over by tomorrow. Now, there's one more thing I wanted to say. I don't if you've seen him or not but the opponent you're going to fight against in the finals is a pretty rough guy." - Void_11221yrCommented
you didn't have to write her name it was pretty obvious from the first part of the sentence that it was her so you didn't need to add that part,or you could have wrote [Anya's POV] that would've been much better
After parting ways with Zero, I, Anya Blanks walked toward the room where all the other participants were. - Void_11221yrReplied to Ryukurou
ohh,I see thanks for making that clear to me đ
I was more worried about Leon. This should have been the third time Leon ever used his stigma. The problem here was that his stigma was too powerful for his body to handle. - Void_11221yrCommented
first*?
I was more worried about Leon. This should have been the third time Leon ever used his stigma. The problem here was that his stigma was too powerful for his body to handle. - Void_11221yrCommented
the experience of being robbed of your senses and not having any control over your body isn't something...*
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not wanting to *
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why is Nathan so weak ? ,the previous Nathan was said to be very hardworking so it doesn't make sense for him to be this weak , or is there a reason for it?
Adding Nathan to the equation wouldn't change anything. He does have the highest compatibility, but his strength is also the lowest. - Void_11221yrCommented
feast*?
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*will surely focus on trying to devour me / on devouring me
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ur welcome
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