It was a great story but could I have some more like it please xx

This is happening to someone in real life x

Brilliant story xx

That night mare was a warning to you and your mum xxx

I thought it turned a bit weird sorry if I am saying this but it went from being exciting to being weird xx

I hope Esther gets well I think she would love to see the little boy and I think Nicholas is secretly in love with her xx

Please don't let the little boy die please xx

Brilliant story xx

Don't leave it this way

I think he will take her and abuse her hopefully he will not xx

It is getting really interesting xx

I think deep down he does love her xx

It is really good thank you xx