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Ouzel_Scrivener2yrPostedFrom the synopsis to the end, from the first letter to the last dot of the story, I say that it deserves all of my five stars. Despite the little technical issues of placement of punctuation marks, and a little of typos, the rest are all well done, specially the character design, I really love how the characters where all portrayed and their stability and their development. I also like to commend the last three chapters, it really surprises me and the finale greatly satisfied my reader heart. This is not my first female lead novel that I read but this is the first ever story that I wrote a review for and with all my heart recommended to everyone to give it a try.
- Ouzel_Scrivener2yrCommentedDo you not know our pain? Our suffering? Our endless days stuck inside the bathroom doing one hand calisthenics?
- Ouzel_Scrivener2yrCommentedAhem! Don't look at me with those eyes filled with ridicule and contempt, for I am sure that you, yes you! The one reading this right now is the same. Both of us are virgins!
- Ouzel_Scrivener2yrCommentedAhem! Don't look at me with those eyes filled with ridicule and contempt, for I am sure that you, yes you! The one reading this right now is the same. Both of us are virgins!
- Ouzel_Scrivener2yrCommentedThat is the number of times my heart pulsed inside my body, before I gave it away. I, who had lived a painful, yet happy, life had many regrets and among those regrets was to dieā¦ a virgin!
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Does the MC develops daddy kinks or something? Or it's just me eho think so? hahahaha sorry š author šø
let daddy go and I promise, to never eat pork againā¦ Blake felt despair when he saw that the mutated boars did not have any thoughts of letting him go. - Ouzel_Scrivener2yrCommented
It would be better if my mom can be as sweet as his. Envious (āāį“„ā)āå½”ā»āā»
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A mother will always do everything...such love!!
He was one of the victims of the Boston Marathon bombing. Ever since Miriam had been working more shifts in the clinic to meet up with their financial needs. - Ouzel_Scrivener2yrCommented
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What a dumb way to die. - Ouzel_Scrivener2yrCommented
What does Encore mean? Im just curious š¤£
Encore - Ouzel_Scrivener2yrCommentedCh 71 Enemy Or Ally?
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My brain cell is dying.
Like a planetoid bowling ball of segmented, ashen white, chitinous carapace, it traveled as a relativistic phantom of blurred white that promised nothing but death and destruction. - Ouzel_Scrivener3yrCommented
my god!! mighty author why do you have to do thisss. it is bad for my already poor heart, why does it have to happen again? !!! ššš
The room of the two was once again opened without any prior warning. It also happened at such an inappropriate time when the two were acting this intimate - Ouzel_Scrivener3yrCommented
This Chapter is a truly wonderful piece, and thank you for sharing such thing to us. I love how the whole story turn out, during reading the early and middle turn of events I have to put my phone down and take a calming breathe before continuing my journey on your story. I love how you give great personification of each of your character. lastly and most important of all..thank you for showing how fantasy can exceed the harsh reality
Ch 99 Epilogue