I think you should do happy but with a little bit of tragedy (just a little bit, not too much and not too little). No tragedy at all seems unrealistic and naive but too much tragedy in one story will just make the story needlessly edgy and dark.

I think he's talking about the author, not the MC

It's love at first sight

Next thing you know Quinn falls in love with the raven and she's actually an animagus.

Star Wars... Huh... Please add some Stormtroopers and other stuff like that in the next chapter, please! I really want to mentally hear the *pew* *pew* *pew* sound as Ethan almost gets lazered but the stormtroopers can't kill them because of their ridiculous aim.

Thanks for the new chapter. Keep up the good work.

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5 whole stars. It's a really good story and it has its own story that doesn't stick too close to the original. I've been reading this for a few weeks or so and I can't wait for the author to update more even though he uploads more than once a week or so. [img=update]

I have only read the first two chapters and the summary, but despite that tI know for a fact that this fanfic will be amazing. Another reason I gave this fanfic 5 stars was because of the intro of the first chapter.

For me, it just feels confusing. I don't hate it, but I don't like it either.

Why does this sound so ominous?

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no harem

BTW I'm pretty sure the only thing that they are surprised about is the fact that Alex is a boy

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I agree

O h n o ! C O R O N A !

This is the second time I've seen something like this today, so I'm going to tell you, what I told him. Don't you dare fail your exams

Don't you dare fail your exams