Feraterais
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Feraterais2yrReplied to Lazy_Cat_SunnyWhich language is that
It was a small square paper carton, and the packaging was no different from any conventional flu medicine. However, the text printed on it was neither Chinese nor English, and he was unable to recognise what language it was.- Feraterais2yrCommented
These are vivid descriptions
Graham took a step back, and he swung his blade across the roof. THe portion of it Chance was standing on now had lines from the blade. With a tip of the blade touching the lines gently, the roof began to collapse. - Feraterais2yrCommented
You missed a quotation mark here Really, author You need to improve your grammar and spelling
"Officer Wells called it in.'' said a shady looking man with a gray coat with 2 others scouting the place. One of them yelled out about a Hellfire Arm, but I don't think they got their hands on it, yet. The rest is history." Rollins, the squatting officer spoke in a fast tone. "I called it backup, also HAST." - Feraterais2yrCommented
That's gonna be a lot of destruction if they all have Hellfire guns
"We've been confiscating some Hellfire Arms over the last year. This is just another day to do so. Chance, I trust you got a piece on you?" Chance opened his coat to reveal a silver plated gun. "Good, I hope you're ready for a fight." - Feraterais2yrCommented
How powerful could they be?
"Iwo Jima. The Representative made a deal with some soldiers, some of them were great friends of mine. The amount of death and destruction those Hellfire Arms brought." Chance paused. "Those Arms were so powerful it made tanks and planes look like toys." - Feraterais2yrCommented
Pun intended
There was a silence after Fermor asked that question. By this time, he and Chance had passed the Concord State Building. "The Representative gets your soul by the time you die. Hellfire Arms. No pun intended but they pack one hell of a punch, of course you'll only know what kind of Hellfire Arm you got by the time you make the deal with the Representative." - Feraterais2yrCommented
So the supernatural does exist here? Or is there a twist coming?
"Not that I know of. Nobody's ever seen him." Chance replied. "What I do know is that the Gunsmith's Representative offered the Allies, including American soldiers, usage of the Hellfire Arms to win the war, firearms with powers beyond what man would think of. It was more than just a bullet involved. There was a catch though, to use one." - Feraterais2yrCommented
A huge world What is the representative's role, I wonder
Fermor's squad car had a smooth surface for its seats, including the ones at the back reserved for criminals alike. Chance was in the passenger seat, looking at the streets and the people passing by. The two were on the road within the Central area of Morissey. Buildings were colossal and close to each other. Very few of them were small and short. - Feraterais2yrCommented
Just like what happened in Colombia during the Narco war
"No, not yet." Hill replied. "But I'll be sure to talk to another. I heard Rosenthal's pulling all the stops to this Hellfire Arm crisis, at the very least get the Hellfire Arms gone. First he's getting the Havertons, and well, if really necessary, maybe the military. I just hope we don't have to get the World involved." - Feraterais2yrCommented
A lot of crimson here
Chance saw the insides of the room the gangster was tortured in. The walls were coated in crimson, some of the red being a tiny bit brighter than the walls. The gangster's blood perhaps, splashed onto the wall like water. - Feraterais2yrCommented
Is this alternate history? And just what are Hellfire arms
"I know Hellfire Arms were used back in the war 4 years ago, but I didn't expect them to turn up here in town." Chance looked at Howitzer's body. Bullet holes were everywhere, each of those holes made the body's dried blood darker than it was supposed to be. The victim's face was a different tale. - Feraterais2yrCommented
Of course it would
Chance walked behind Fermor. The officer in front of him led the way as other officers were closing the area. 2 officers seemed robust, and they were standing in front of their cars. Chance had a sense that a certain type of storm would be coming: the kind involving nosy people with dumb questions. - Feraterais2yrCommented
So this story has supernatural elements
The area surrounding the building was filled with police officers, all drenched in navy blue uniforms. Red mist was coming out of Howitzer's body, the gangster lying down on the gurney, face up. The mist was odorless, but it was red as blood. - Feraterais2yrCommented
Is Howitzer alive? I thought he would be the MC
"That's the victim I was gonna talk about." Fermor said. "Lloyd Howitzer. They found his body with mist coming out and well, it's making people reluctant to go outside." - Feraterais2yrCommented
What is dripper
"Hellfire Arms, and Drippers." Chance said the word 'Dripper' in a stronger tone. - Feraterais2yrCommented
That would be drugs in the 70s and 80s
"As expected, Rosenthal asked as many officers as possible to visit all of the available Haverton detectives in the city." Fermor spoke of the police commissioner. "Hellfire Arms have been causing havoc around the city for the past year, and the commissioner's one of the few people who has pretty much had enough. The Board of Officials' backing him up." - Feraterais2yrCommented
Where is the stick?
"I have." said Chance, cracking open the bottle of cola. The red stick slapped on the glass bottle and its graphic of an explosion was as visible as day. "Though I wonder what brings you here." - Feraterais2yrCommented
Who is the officer and who is the investigator
"No thank you." Fermor replied politely. The officer positioned his posture as the investigator took his seat. "I trust you have read the papers today?"