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Sageash

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yahallo! a newbie writer here read my novel trying to add at least one chapter everyday https://ko-fi.com/sageash2714 If u guys feel like supporting my writing

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  • Sageash
    Sageash1mth
    Posted

    The author have done a great job in fleshing out characters and the vibe the surroundings carry, there is a certain sense of mystery present too.... the only thing I'd say is the more is less I want to read more and more chapter good work author for trying something which we didn't see often here

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    Blaze Deception: A Villain in a Hero's Disguise
    Realistic · Air_Ace
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  • Sageash
    Sageash3mth
    Posted

    I think this novel has a nice potential, its not the kind I usually spot here but it gets you hooks by a simple setting that revolves around a caste of lively characters

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    Half me and half...
    Fantasy · Inemin
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Posted

    I'd say the best thing about this book is the way it portrays stuff without overdoing it unlike many other books in the same genre. Protagonist's personality is relatable and enjoyable. I think this have a nice potential

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    I Enchanted The Prince
    Fantasy · Jeri_
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Posted

    First two chapters, And I am already hooked, even though I rarely do reviews I felt this one deserved it. The author is good at portraying personalities, setting up the vibe and progressing the plot, I didn't find anything unlikable so far aside from dialogue at end of para a few times.

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    再アップロード
    Fantasy · Meownalisa
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to Azrael_DAngel

    She'll be relevant in plot further, keep reading

    Ch 2 Prologue: Death & meeting with Goddess and look a like#2
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    Fusion Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to Frostmist_GM

    Thanks for motivating me

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    Returned by a Thousand Times
    Urban · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to Entiverse

    Ahh this is my first attempt at romcom thanks for being interested

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    Returned by a Thousand Times
    Urban · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to Mopelade

    XD

    Ch 1 Mess, Help, and Memories
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    Returned by a Thousand Times
    Urban · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to DaoOfNoFucks

    XD

    "Today we are raiding the place we doubt kidnapped beastkins are hidden. Lord Viscount has told us to raid the place as soon as possible".
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    Fusion Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Posted

    The story is very pulling, and have a mysterious vibe to it... there are not much dialogues in beginning setting the vibe high, the story unfolds creatively and cleverly leaving me wanting more!! great work author!! will look forward to more

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    New King Of Eternal Lands
    Fantasy · Kita8944
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to ImSadge

    today I'll

    Ch 129 “Jue, right? What are you doing here?”
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    Fusion Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to Un1que

    just a small break

    Ch 129 “Jue, right? What are you doing here?”
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    Fusion Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to ImSadge

    you finally reached here

    Ch 129 “Jue, right? What are you doing here?”
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    Fusion Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to Eclipse_Ranger

    Dodging question pro

    "Aircon is that which it is but not them,"
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    Fusion Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to Eclipse_Ranger

    Yes

    "Okay dear, the baby was looking bored for a few days and Aiena would be happy too," she said everyone is saying baby seemed bored should I buy a toy store…. I guess not Lina and Kyra will call me an idiot parent again. It is so hard having the cutest baby.
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    Fusion Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to Malphina_Stellar

    my error

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Fusion Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Posted

    The story is well written here and there there could be some better prose but as it is the story has quite a lot to give; I especially loved the narrator so much so I'll end up stealing it for my future novel~~ thanks for giving us this great work!! Jones Sensei

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    Project Title = Romance
    Teen · UnreliableJones_
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Commented

    split paragraphs a bit more and you should run it through grammarly and grammar look up once, story itself is looking nice

    Ch 1 The Summons
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    The Amulet of Soaric
    Fantasy · LightNight
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to ProTect_LoLi

    Unbranded TV with a look matching the room with specifications of Samsung QN90A Neo QLED TV

    At this goddess nodded, coming a bit closer. Turned the tv on, What appeared on the TV was a glorious town right out of a historic, movie it seems.
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    Fusion Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Sageash
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  • Sageash
    Sageash1yr
    Replied to sushikiller
    "that cannot be. I just fuc**ng blinked. Who dies from blinking!!??"
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    Fusion Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Sageash
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