April_M_7937
nope
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author the language and grammar is constantly degrading. it's at a point where there's hardly any similarity between the first part of the book and this part. I think this started happening after that long gap you took before updating again. I can't even read it anymore, it's that bad. I love ur story and I want to read it but it's in need of much work in terms of grammer and sentence structures. I think this is in need of some serious heavy editing.
i like the 4th one the best