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Farhander

Farhander

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I am secretly an author.

2021-01-22 JoinedGlobal
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  • Farhander
    Farhander3yr
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    Its kinda like Evangelion but if it was set on the present tbh, minus the mechs but added "Guardians"

    War of the Two Kinds
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  • Farhander
    Farhander3yr
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    An incredible story on a weak to strong character that not only focuses on two individuals, yes two . But also relies heavily on lore based interactions among other characters and individuals for the remaining story. With 25 chapters and a completed Arc, this book is promising and gives a refreshing sense of new might. The main female lead of this book is kind and honest yet also brave and a little tipsy in curiousity here and there. She just like the male character have her flaws, non spoiler but she is just as strong as the male lead even if shes in another pathway of time. The male lead in the other hand, well, the younger version is rather reckless and doesn't really follow order much. From reading through and amalysing the works, he seems to act a little smart when doing something, creatively strong and also implied quite a womaniser. Though, its more of a shared compliment than an actual pervert one usually sees. A rather realistic approach for his ups and downs. He too is quite a good a good chap, over time he learns and matures on the way before the female lead takes over his legacy. Background characters and overall layout is pretty balanced and detailed in observing. The characters are all given a certain stereotype but with a more mingle in a realistic approach. You could have a happy go lucky shorty but instead of having some sort of temper tantrum 24/7, she acts more maturely than any of her older peers but also suffer from some sort of illness that won't be spoiled. Then there is the monotonic edgy kid, but instead of a kid, it's a full grown ***** or young ***** who has to deal with life in a more sophisticated and methodical approach. Also, having some sort of dark background, she has developements of feelings and change in behaviour because of the exposure to good and nice individuals even if her tree doesn't like her for who she is. The consequences are naught and really spelled out correctly. Details in writing is true. Though lacking in grammar, the use of voices, accents, tones and even other languages gives a more sense of diversity in this path and theme of multi-stranded global archetype of character overalls. Kinda realistic with how the modern world works with the use of multiple races working together, typical language barriers and also helpfulness among a person to person. Also due to this theme of a pandemic/apocalypse of sorts , it makes sense one half either tries to help rebuild society while the other side suffer slowly (but with some realism, they try to change with support from modern facilities). I can say if this book gets more love and views, it could be the very next thing. Even if its at the wrong site to be posted due to it being involved with mostly cringe based stereotypical romances and/or "systems". It does have a light to shine on its own. It mixes in with every genre, quite a interesting twist. Its an action, an adventure, a dark comedy, a comedy, a millitary/war flick and all time also a character developement sheet similar to how dungeons and dragons or even rpgs form. Also with a small dash of realism, magic and sci-fi onto it. P.S - Author, thanks for promoting your novel to our server, it was really a good add-on. Take a reading on this, if you prepare the more traditional yet modern detailing approach of novel-based writing. ♥️

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  • Farhander
    Farhander3yr
    Commented

    Pretty good so far, getting better over time. Makes it more interesting with the story.

    Ch 25 Logbook #018 - The Commence
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  • Farhander
    Farhander3yr
    Commented

    True, I wouldn't want someone telling me not to speak my own language in my own country.

    Shanina stares at William as she makes a stern look towards him. 'Sie können mir nicht sagen, dass ich in meinem eigenen Land kein Deutsch sprechen soll.' [You can't tell me not to speak German in my own country.]
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  • Farhander
    Farhander3yr
    Commented

    A little exeggerated with "giggling like a child' or is it her voice is just light for her body type. Considering shes plumb and slightly younger than Geist.

    Giggling a little like a little child, Demonia nods at him pleased with his remark as she hugs onto her rifle again, custom-fitted with a grenade launcher. "We will be there in half an hour, so you may continue taking a rest or if you are really good, then you can watch over us all instead." Closing her eyelids, Demonia relaxes before continuing her nap.
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  • Farhander
    Farhander3yr
    Commented

    I mean, the guardian within the blade if its even a guardian could have started it or perhaps, maybe it pressed onto the start button by pressure.

    ---Tape Starts (Somehow)---
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  • Farhander
    Farhander3yr
    Posted

    A pretty decent start from usual eldritch abominations. This story consists kf two protagonist going back and forth from different timelines. Pretty understandable with good uses of map detailing and character design. Realistically works with the magic of this universe, acts more like how most element works nowadays over time. Always as an energy source then slowly succumbs to heavier and more destructive power . Characters are human and/or humanlike with distinct personalities. the character do not have a stereotypic personality which I always like to have. This guy may have used inspiration from his parents, friends and overall experience. Thats what I assume. After all this, I propose this guy a five star.

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