HOLY SHIT this was good I started reading it as soon as i found the mc was homophobic. And I am not disappointed. I applaud the author for saying things out boldly. It was a good read , I enjoyed it very much. You have my full support , just don't drop this fic plzzz.

preach brother. Accept this humble disciple and teach me your ways

what's there to deviate . HE IS THE PATH!!

aren't Thanagrans pretty durable ?. So how can they be injured from bats biting them?

think about it like this , nobody knew the location of the chamber of secrets not even Dumbledore .Harry and Ron rushes into the chamber to save ginny , they are both desperate. While i admit Dumbledore may have known about the basilisk that must have been why he sent Fawkes with the sorting hat. And you must also know that Dumbledore wasn't in Hogwarts at the time. This is just what i think if I'm wrong pls correct me

I love this fic so much. when I first read this I was a bit skeptical about this story bou the author has done a brilliant job at writing this story. The world building is very good , story is awesome .My personal opinion is that Pluto should show a little bit more emotions , I hope this would gradually happen as he and Thena raise their son . That masochist Mandarin part was seriously hilarious I laughed so hard that my mom scolded me for disturbing her sleep 😂😂😂

I'm really eager to see the unseen one's help grodd . What would be the reaction of the nation's and other organizations??. Would they would start to research about the unseen one's and make the connection through history to Pluto. And you know the da Vinci dude painted the eternals , so wouldn't anyone recognize them??. Really looking forward to know more

thanks for not dropping this . it is just too good to be dropped

I don't quite understand that last part why did Pluto do that . Even if he hadn't done anything nothing much would have changed. So did he just wanted to interact with Steve??. I don't know , if Steve sees him after being capsicle wouldn't Plutos immortality get exposed??

sus....

yes

No way.... Don't tell me she is going to fall in love with tobirama . Is this the prediction of aunt wu

The fic has good potential if written correctly. There are not many twilight fanfics with Alucrad as the MC. Your decision to make the MC to have to work for more power was good, cuz we all know how ridiculously powerful Alucrad is . So if he was overpowered from the beginning the story would be boring as the plot progress. From the 3 chapters this was a nice fic . ALL THE BEST DON'T DISAPPOINT ME

thanks for the heads up

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Nice 👌

good job🔥👍👍 really love reading this fic😍😍👌👌

This has the potential to be a good story. But I don't know if you are going to continue updating this . 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍

are you continuing this ???

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