?

You might as well delete the early chapters and write them anew if that's how you start your novel. Stuff like this just kills all interest

Bruh, she's a cultivator, won't she need like 2 days to get tired?

???

Bruh, at that cultivation level? Some sect elder was a whole realm lower than him, no?

Also depending on where you stand the western continent might as well be the eastern continent

There's no colour, so I'd say he got not eyes

most populous race on earth and his starting point

Imagine how cringy that must be when you're Victor and someone says this to you

Colony?

At some point she's gonna join the harem and learn about the wives' and daughters' powers and just shutdown, maybe lose control about her divinity and almost self destruct

Don't call her that 🥺

What about the wives?

*Ophis

Except if they bone their own mother

*her body

😂

But they still look like dragons?

I'd really appreciate if the English would get better again. It was fairly decent for the longest time but it got way worse in the last few months