Carrots are actually bad for rabbits :( better give him green leafs
I am sorry, I don’t usually downgrade books but the broken english in this one makes me do so. Got only until chapter 7. Constant mix up of pronouns, unfinished sentences, incorrect words that make no sense. Would be an interesting book if it was readable.
O.o did power stone support got removed?
Would love to read Damiens story as well :)
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
I still can’t get over the fact how everyone seem to treat it normally/forgot how Cassius almost murdered Mari… i wouls have expected more emotional reprecussions from that :( Cassius changing was too fast for me, but i might re-read in case i skimmed over some details because i was so excited to read more [img=update]
Oh I saw that you are working on mutiple books, no pressure, just hope you will pick this book up in the future [img=recommend]
I would love it if this story can be continued, like the characters and the setting. Would love to learn more about this world and how the story of them would bloom.
“If you knew”
Interesting and entertaining to read, great work so far. I hope to see more chapters about Cassius learning Mariannes struggles in society, learning why his methods were wrong, maybe realizing what he had almost done to Killian, leaving him fatherless. The complete 180 felt a bit strange but him realizing these things would be cool to read too. A complete breakdown of character [img=faceslap] Also why in the original sotryline if he was thinking of divorcing Mari did it never happen :)