Clueless59
Fuck coffee and tea, I am a goblin that runs off of pure spite for my characters. "Oh, you've made my mother abusive and permanently scarred me. Give it your best shot." DEM'S FIGHTING WORDS!
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Clueless5911mthReplied to Harley_QuinceIt is perfectly healthy for 11 year olds to have crushes. Statements that make me sound like a pediphile aside, I did not want to have any mention of anything remotely related to romance in book 1. The only reason I included it was because people really wanted to know what type of romance there would be in the future. I didn’t want to respond (mainly because I hadn’t decided yet) but eventually said she was bi. I responded to the comment but felt weird for that being the only way a reader would see what her sexuality was for a few books, so I put this in. In hindsight, there were better ways to do it rather then talking about an 11 year olds curves and a 13 year old shirtless. the more I think about this the more icky it feels. I will now be deleting that section.
This paragraph has been deleted.- Clueless5911mthReplied to ZubzasThe uniform consists of a grey knee-high skirt, button-up long-sleeved white blouse, grey sweater with a V-neck low enough to see the black tie, and a black cloak with a hood. I slip my wand into my shoulder wand holster that I bought a little bit ago. Guarding the door, I put my mask back on. A silent yawn escapes me as I exit the bathroom. I didn't get much sleep last night due to the nightmare I tried to avoid.
- Clueless591yrReplied to Mr_H3nt1
I have thought about that and I'm not going to deny it but as to will it ever happen... Why are you asking me? That's for future me to handle.
It's not like it was any worse than the spells that hit me when I miss-timed the Shield Charm, I think, looking down at my torn uniform and bandaged hand. Although I do think that I'll go with using Shield Charms, considering that I've gotten the hang of the timing and absorbing a spell doesn't completely nullify it and just weakens the effects. - Clueless591yrReplied to Mr_H3nt1Ch 18 Blood-Flavored Lollipops
- Clueless591yrReplied to AcesHigh
The sugar thing or the house thing? If the house thing, agreed. If the sugar thing, you do realise that the one pouring sugar is American right?
'Why aren't you sitting with your house?' I ask as she pours sugar on her eggs. - Clueless591yrReplied to StromLantern
Who honestly doesn't love him?
"Ye know, I was in the same boat as you. Yer gonna do jus' fine. Dumbledore's A great man, an'" he turns his head to look at me over his shoulder with a smile that reaches his eyes. "Yeh don' have ter be ashamed of what yeh are." - Clueless591yrReplied to AcesHigh
Future Clueless here. lol. Yeah, my writing was a bit on the nose in the beginning. She stops directly referring to herself as a monster at some point but still feels that way somewhat.
"I don't know. I bet all of them are fun to be in! What about you Catlyn?" We start following Hagrid as her question brings a battle from the back of my head to the forefront of my thoughts. What house will I be in? I'm not brave enough to be a Gryffindor, kind enough to be a Hufflepuff, smart enough to be a Ravenclaw, or cunning enough to be a Slytherin. Is it possible I won't get any house? No that's impossible, at the very least I'd be put in Hufflepuff because 'they accept everyone who doesn't fit with the others.' But would the teachers allow such a monstrous thing to be a Hufflepuff? - Clueless591yrReplied to Magn0lia
Eventually, but in this book no. She's 11.
----Quick note, Things in * for Catlyn will be when she's using BSL (British Sign Langauge), and things in ' will be when she's using her notebook. - Clueless591yrReplied to Irgendwe
Thank you so much for catching this!
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- Clueless592yrReplied to Mr_H3nt1
From last chapter: “‘Has the Philosopher's Stone been destroyed yet?’ A dark look peered out of a corner of his blue eyes. ‘Severus, why are you asking me that?’ Shame poured from my dark mark as his eyes narrowed. ‘I'm not asking for myself,’ Dumbledore's body relaxed slowly as my words got deciphered through his genius.” From this chapter: “I unconsciously start rubbing the piece of the Philosopher's Stone dangling around my neck. I mean, what am I going to say? Sorry, I couldn't write, I was recovering in the Hospital Wing after failing to stop my biological uncle from getting into the room where the thing that later allows Snape to perfect my Mana Potion is held!… That being said, I'm surprised that the Philosopher's Stone stabilized the potion. They even allowed me to keep a piece of it after they destroyed it!” Snape figured out that the Philosopher’s Stone could stabilize the problems with the potion. He then asked Dumbledore to allow Catlyn to keep a piece of the stone to make more potions. hope that cleared it up for you! If more people get confused or didn’t get the significance of that part I’ll come back and make it more clear! :)
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Nope. Thank
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PHRASING!
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