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Do what you need to do but please don't drop this. It is one of my all time favourite books that I have ever read.

Second option, if you don't enjoy writing the book then the quality will drop regardless if you mean to or not. So write a new story in a way that pleases you and afterwards you could continue this story(if you want) in a way that satisfies us as readers and you as an author.

Take as long as a rest as you need. Better if you take a short break every now and then instead of overworking yourself so that you can stay consistent.

Thanks for the chapter.

Go next week so your brain has time to recover.

This clears stuff up. Thanks and keep up the great work!

Thanks for the chapter but I have to ask who is Julie? I don't know if I just forgot her or something else but this singular point has confused me massively can someone clear it up for me?

Love the content keep it as is!

Thanks for the chapter, really love what you're writing and don't worry about making mistakes it's all about learning from and improving on them. So as long as you keep trying you will eventually be able to write a story and look at with pride.

I don't know if you've thought of this before but how about giving akihiko's rinnegan cookie shaped tomoes similar to ayame's ramengan?

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I mean did you even read the book that well? The MC/Author has clearly told us that he doesn't want to interfere with Asta too much lest he become dependent on MC. Granted I read this after the rewrite of the first few chapters so maybe it was as you describe it was before but now though it isn't like that at all.

The only thing I hear reading this is the sound of Mario screaming as he falls down a hole.