TurtleOfRainbow

Actual W Ball knowledge, Emesis Blue is such an amazing film

My only issue with the chapter is Nezu bringing up highly personal info that Bakugo absolutely didn't need to hear. Because giving people more ammo to shoot at each other with is always a good idea.

I retract my statement, should've read ahead before opening my fat mouth.

I understand why you took this direction, but it is disappointing. The tension and difficulty of the last chapter doesn't feel as validated anymore. It's like telling a joke with a good setup but changing the punchline at the last minute to fit the audience. Again, I understand that this is the safe and arguably better choice, but it feels like you wanted to take the risk, but backed out last minute when you saw the issues.

I've read hundreds of novels in my time in webnovel, plus hundreds more on RR. This might actually be the some of the best character writing I've ever seen. The complexity sits just right at uncomfortable but not cringey. Actually amazing that of all the stories I've read, a fanfic on webnovel of all places is what has top tier writing. Keep writing, and try to branch out of webnovel since they can be so restrictive (check out RR or crossposting on fanfic sites).

Those first 8 points were gained when he had an insane lead over everyone else. Once others got involved points would be more scarce and so his point gain would fall off hard. Granted he would have more if he went solo anyways, but he was banking on selling himself as a team player and "hero".

Either added an extra zero or literally didnt use their brain for a second.

Nearly 20 chapters and almost nothing has happened. For someone so hungry for freedom, our MC is very content with doing absolutely nothing.

He did, his brain wouldn't have been able to handle his own intelligence and memory.