I added your book to my library before he first chapter ended. Great character development and story line. Kudos to you!

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I am thoroughly enjoying this book. The characters, plot and story line are intelligently developed. I love the use of English language. Great vocabulary :) Anticipating new chapters and when El and Vale join forces. Keep up the great work...thank you!

Thank you! Thoroughly enjoyable read.

Thoroughly enjoyable! Great character and plot development.