I liked your story but it is true that the overall structure needed to be changed.
i'm expecting something better next time[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
000000000000000p000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 sory about ,just keep it up,i like your story