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Fantasii1yrCommentedCh 106 Chapter 102- Fantasii1yrCommented"Yeah, just two plates of pancakes... Extra syrup." Rebecca tiredly asks the waitress in Tom's Diner.
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Depends on what’s in the soup, but generally both
(Do you eat soup, or do you drink it?) - Fantasii1yrCommentedCh 50 Not the world I wish to be
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I’d rather him have a lay with lydia or Serena…
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Interesting premise, poor execution I’m currently 5 chapters in and having a real hard time seeing how this novel has such high praises. The author clearly doesn’t put much thought into his main character’s actions and he feels dull. I feel like I’m reading some cookie cutter novel. The plot of the novel is lacking depth of thought in many instances. Why would the main protagonist be put under his brothers command? How does he go from saving Hawkeyes family in a hostage situation to being deployed in Afghanistan? Why would you marry and have kids with the woman your brother proposed to? Why are there hand grenades inside a prison? No seriously, WHY ARE THERE EXPLOSIVES INSIDE A PRISON??? Another issue with this novel is that it struggles not being edgy. I don’t know if the author is trying to make his protagonist seem cool, but I don’t think a guard in a prison is in on your brother’s revenge plot against you. Speaking of revenge plots, does our protagonist even have one? It seems like he doesn’t even think for himself half the time. He literally gets to talk to his family in whatever afterlife their in and they get maybe half a paragraph of writing? Very little emotional impact. Overall I’m disappointed by this novel so far. I hope that it improves later on and if it does I’ll update this review with something I like other than the protagonist’s powers.
- Fantasii1yrCommentedIt only took him a few hours to know what had happened and was shook to his core to learn what had happened.
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Kinda cringe talking to a corpse, then again he is probably about to go on a revenge-fueled slaughter
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And 1-2 days later then scheduled as of late…
A shame that... I only post once a week. - Fantasii1yrCommented
Bro you’d turn them into paste with those 💀, an assault carbine or brush gun would’ve been fine for the situation
Those ghouls or the convicts in Primm wouldn't even have been half the problem they were if we had a decent minigun or rocket launcher with us. - Fantasii1yrReplied to bluS24
Ah yes, because there’s a lot of nature to be found around asteroids and stars
Ahh! And then there's my custom sword-style… I have decided to name it: Nature's Wrath! And no, it's not a lame name! After doing way too much research on various martial arts and sword techniques thanks to Samson's personal connections in the Marines over the years, I came to the conclusion that the best way to develop an all-encompassing sword style is to mimic nature. For what else is more all-enconpassing than nature? - Fantasii1yrCommented
When’s zero fate getting its next update? Is it on hiatus?
Be sure to check my other novels if you have time. - Fantasii1yrCommented
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Ahh! And then there's my custom sword-style… I have decided to name it: Nature's Wrath! And no, it's not a lame name! After doing way too much research on various martial arts and sword techniques thanks to Samson's personal connections in the Marines over the years, I came to the conclusion that the best way to develop an all-encompassing sword style is to mimic nature. For what else is more all-enconpassing than nature? - Fantasii1yrCommentedCh 5 Level up, Going outside, and Current Situation.
- Fantasii2yrCommentedCh 113 Overwhelming Emotion
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Lesser MBS: develop slight immunity to all types of damage received.
{Lesser MBS (mind, body, soul) adaptation: basically a much weaker version of SCP 682 skill mixed with garou's (opm) learning adaptibility traded for gamers mind and gamers body (You can still die but you learn and get resistance's much easier)