john_johnson_2651

What’s with the sub headers in the novel, are you writing a textbook

Somehow I find reading this novel annoying, just choose one pathway, why all of them. It’s confusing and annoying

Why

No racial slurs please

Will his eyes still go blind with perfect sage body

The short chapters doesn’t encourage me to read more

Preferred your draft, that was good why did you start over

You just had to spoil it, a time skip would have been better

I know you hate dumbledor from all your novels but the way this chapter ends doesn’t feel right. He isn’t in his own world, why transfer the hate and leave him to die.

Supreme level trash.