Screw you and your stones why does dc stories always leave one part of the story and jump to another it’s really annoying

Author san with no fashion sense

I don’t like reading novels like this, it gets annoying sometimes.

What’s the name of the original novel?

He can learn it and use the seal in the cave with many zetsus, it can help change his bloodline

What a cliche. A boring cliche.

Gold flames and cero

I would prefer a longer chapter to your facts

The first Uchiha didn’t need to transplant eyes he awakened ems after three tomoe, just make his bloodline purer because of his uzumaki genes.

If minato is already genin then kushina should be there already. Plot hole my dear author. Minato and kushina went to the academy together.

I don’t think this Elizabethan style of writing is good for fanfics, my dear author.

Screw your motivation, learn to write long chapters

Don’t bother reading, it’s really average.

You should learn to write about all his fights and encounters instead of summarising it

No fate please, you can a function to the system where he can add members of his team and they form a party and improve together with missions. It’s a game isn’t it. If you want summoning, monsters of legend can be summoned, like dragons, phoenix, white tiger, balck turtle, qilin. No fate please

The first person pov is making it confusing, sometimes you don’t if it’s the mc’s pov or some else’s, please stick to the generic form of using names

Mtcheeeww

Paint a bigger picture, the whole world in this novel just feels John’s mansion, John, training and Tony

The suspense is annoying how many chapters just to get his soul back.

This novel sucks, it has no direction just fighting meaningless fighting, every chapter, after this will another enemy spawn out of nowhere