Mika_Carter_Davis

Writing is solid, but the story drags. It takes too long to reveal Sharon’s true identity due to asinine “reasons”, which means she endures unnecessary humiliation for the sake of underwhelming “face slaps”.

I agree since the prices increased for the purchase of chapters that were already expensive!

I hate how the author portrays the ML as evil (due to misunderstandings) just to have the FL forgive him after a a cliché “sacrifice”. Hard pass!!

Yup, and the fl will reconcile with the ml for some asinine reason.

Why?! She tried to kill you!

BS. Lari is too understanding!!

*Frozen not Froze. The author has issues with verbs, prepositions, and conjunctions.

The story is confusing. Italics (or single quotation marks) usually represent inner dialogue, but the author uses this technique and double quotation marks to indicate verbal discussions.

Ugh!! The comma belongs before the fanboys (e.g., “for”, “and”, “but”, “or”, “yet”, “so”).

Dude, you’re conspiring with Qiao’s enemy to snatch her boyfriend.