Chickchick12

whoa, did not expect this twist to actually happen

enemy perspective, nice

When the Judgement came out the plot hit me like a bus. I felt like so many important things were happening in the same scene so it overwhelmed me and it didn't help how slow paced it became for the next 10 chapters. Overall the first arcs curveball as well as the important things said by Price had me realize this story isn't really my type. Also my bad if the names are wrong.

Cupcake

ohhhh

Very good story but I can tell that the story doesn't click with me. Might try to read more later but will probably not. Hopefully this gets finished and not dropped.

This is you.

wow what a great feature that is not suspicious, not only do you lose your character you even forget how you loss.

was meh and the bystanders shouldn't be so in awe in a simple fight even if both players are well known.

yeah but remember this is a mmorpg novel so all the background characters are stupid little babies who have less than 50 IQ