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The story is good, has unique developments, but could be a lot more concise and that would’ve made it more exciting. Too word-y. Characters gave long speeches that no one in reality would be making. The background took too long to build up; could make readers lost interests before it became really exciting. Good thing only 60+ chapters otherwise i would’ve given up all together.
Cute beginnings so far with well defined troubles brewing ahead leading to exciting plot twists and drama. Hopefully the story doesn’t become too unbelievable so that readers will not get bored and give it up.