he could probably think that he has gone crazy and that the MC is just a self imagined friend and if Nobita is up to date then think of the MC as a split personality who doesn't realize what he is that is a split personality.

probably some bad traumatizing childhood memories.

plot hole, why would Nobita think he MC has superpower

why did you delete it

so what, illyana's sword touch you, you dead, she teleports you to her dimension you fall in some places filled with lava you die, you defeat Jean she goes rage mode you dead so everything can kill you in that institute

I think the mc is not going to stay in the mansion for long with what i expect to happen, that is Jean Grey accidentally finding out and you know what happens next.

wasn't the power usage allowed like weren't the students teleporting around and using their powers so what is the issue that i don't seem to get but infuriated illyana.

how can he leave now that your old man is raping his adamantium skull sideways.

you would when there's a guy with an unknown personality and an ever changing one at that who can read the mind of the whole planet and him existing when there are mutants than it is highly he exists so he's a high proximity danger alarm and plus he has the bald head don't forget that

or more like American and other country rule but is it really the case when under the red flag of China, Nah: i don't think so, this guy would be the first to lick the Dictators feet and land where he walked.

What effect does it have

No, what I meant is it should be lion, tiger type and I forgot to tell the animal is just for one chapter with only one purpose that is to give the mc powers just like how the spider who bit spider man had only purpose in existence that is to bite Peter.I will reveal my plans a little bit if there is a lion chosen then it would be a lioness that isn't the one giving powers but is rather the factor that makes the one giving powers agitated to bite him that is a male lion with artificial rabies for years now it is madder in the season the mc is going to choose it making the marvel Mc inherit his sessional madness and no rabies effects and that madness would be negated when the mc becomes more of a superhuman even after mutating he would become stronger which would negate that madness and would later control that madness do battles.

Thanks but can you comment which animal would be good as I have already written the second chapter but just need the final touch which is the animal giving powers but it should be a animal like lion, tiger, jaguar, black panther/black jaguar (no need to worry how it would exist in America cause I have my own sources to get them there) and many other such animals but motive the animals shouldn't be focused on one attribute like cheetah has flexibility and speed focus which is crossed out from the start and animals alike are crossed out.

As an author I will give my own fanfics five stars, anyway please comment to point out problems in the fic and how I can improve it

Nah not really he can lose limbs or body parts after which the system will call it a skin like how in games one can equip skins on their character but in this case it is permanent to say the least until he fixes it by the use of accelerated healing or technology and this also opens a route like if the mc was to equip a enhancement via cyborg methods the system will identify it as skin but this skin can be unrequited through the system and the skill is just there to allow for the learning of skills like in games and earn stat points and many other things.The four arms appearance adaptation was a hint that he can change appearance without the system changing it back into the default one

Thanks but can you please tell how I can lessen mistakes and how I can organise the logic idea

Yes and no because I am still thinking about it as there are two routes first get teleported to earth after 2000s after which it is harem but if I went to the 18s then it is not

Then how would one describe felicia hardy hair as many author change words that describe her hair like some say platinum blond hair, platinum hair, white hair or some other naming but seriously white hair.

Yeah but it could be said as having shiny blond hair or dark blond hair and I don't get why some people also say platinum blonde hair as one could just say platinum hair rather than adding blonde in it is there a obsession or something or does it make it look classy or something

and what is obvious about that as I just said that the mc wasnt't born when Bruce was just out of the womb like many other MCs just have consciousness even before being born so they get the chance to hear and see themselves being named which would make him conclude that he is Bruce Wayne and Bruce himself wouldn't have developed enough of intelligence and consciousness to remember it to let the mc inherit the memory which would tell he is Bruce wayne