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Zozo_776mthReplied to DaoistsGHarmCh 6 Chapter 6- Zozo_771yrReplied to Akisu
The character of Severus is complex but I want to have the character grow with my writing so knowing the relation between James and him i decided to do it like this. I don't believe that the relation between Lily and Snape was cut off so easily as saying "mudblood" just one time. There is also his jealousy of Sirius for his family.
"Oh, look at this. A blood traitor," he sneered, surely referring to Sirius. - Zozo_771yrReplied to Akisu
Hey sorry it was meant to Grindelwald, in the first édition I maked this point as a blank to be able to place the name and at the correction i put Voldemort automaticaly thank you
This paragraph has been deleted. - Zozo_771yrReplied to MrFancy
It's not easy per say but i haq something to with the rewrite of rhe chapter three
After finding my perfect wands, I decided to erase Mr. Olivander's memory using a memory charm that I had seen in I made my way to the Apothecary, eager to select the potion ingredients I needed for brewing some powerful potions. As I browsed through the shop, carefully selecting the herbs and powders that I didn't already possess in my trunks or the Black Castle, I came across some rare ingredients that I knew would come in handy. I added them to my basket, along with a few vials of ready-made potions, just in case those in my possession broke.detailreborn with the memory of olivier queen reborn in harry potter(hiatus)Book&Literature · Zozo_77 - Zozo_771yrReplied to callylloyd
thanks you for the review and pointing the plot i forgot about it, I will try to rewrite the first 6 chapter when i will have more experience
"My name is Penelope Clearwater," she introduced herself. "I'm a fourth-year Ravenclaw. What house are you hoping to be in?"detailreborn with the memory of olivier queen reborn in harry potter(hiatus)Book&Literature · Zozo_77 - Zozo_771yrReplied to Hasan_Shopnil
I know but the world is cruel and the war will start soon I wanted him to get accustomed to killing earlier, as an assassin in his previous life it's no problem for him. The world of Naruto is often over-simplified in my view, so killing so early draws a parallel to Itachi which was shown on the battlefield. I'm not very good at writing emotion too so I don't want my mc to be an overly sentimental character
Ch 2 Chapter 2 - Zozo_771yrReplied to Hasan_Shopnil
The academy three are the easiest, for the henge i just made him do a shell of chakra and for the katon it came to me like that, thank you for the review thought. In the future chapters i will try to explain how the technique work by comparing it to another and why he was able to do it without knowing too much so thank you.
Ch 4 Chapter 4 - Zozo_771yrReplied to Winter_MetorCh 7 Chapter 7 First Daydetailreborn with the memory of olivier queen reborn in harry potter(hiatus)Book&Literature · Zozo_77
- Zozo_771yrReplied to The_Weird_MagicianCh 3 Chapter 3
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- Zozo_771yrReplied to Anonny_Anonymous
Hello thank you for the review and your point of view but even if Batman should be more skilled i think it's harder for someone to not kill someone in a world like harry potter and this mentality woud hurt him in the long run as for the IQ I'am not sure, Olivier learned in order to survive and is ready to kill but batman it's in order to clean gotham so Olivier memory should be more practical in my point of vue
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