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Training puppet w/ all weapons training to maximize his necklace’s potential

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

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Thx for chapters.

Just checked your first mention of her was ch 17 with no actual introduction. She had a name drop at the end and first dialog was ch 19 when she just referred to Shirizens as lord.

Agreed

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Both, mix and match so every chapter has its own little flair.

Me

Personally don’t like other verse powers being used in different worlds. Skills and techniques go for it but powers always break the power scales. So I vote remove.

I think this is a chapter from before the re-write.

Well Chen Li had his evil Long side and his Emperor Long goodie two shoes side that you had just got to starting with.

Keep the beast contact since he doesn’t know or trust her. However I don’t think you should go his full evil side like the original. Personally I prefer your characters more balanced personality of both good and evil. Rather than just one or the other.

I’d say just don’ make your character pure evil side of hen+@i. Like the good girls get the good seduction, lucky pervert and whatnot becoming his allie girls. Where the others get the black.male turning into tool girls.

It almost seems that she still sees as just her cute disciple / son and treating him as a kid. So while everyone else is starting to him growing into a strong cultivator she just sees him loosing his innocence and fights against his choices. Well that’s my opinion on her character at least also why I can see past the ”bad image” her character can get. Once she accepts his change though I see her status changing fast. Thanks for the chapter.