WINS_Wallbang
I love reading light novels, fan fiction, or just novels in general. I have a lot of ideas, suggestions for novels, etc. But I don’t have a direction on how to write a book so just contact me and ask.
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Good job! Although I would like to see more harem development. He’s a dragon he should act like one! I hope he changes his race to a full dragon instead of staying human otherwise he would be a fake dragon god sovereign. Don’t forget what the fundamentals of what a dragon is. They are a greedy, arrogant, prideful, lustful, etc at heart. Other than those issues your book is awesome. I look forward to see more chapters released every week it’s always a pleasure to read them. PS: Dragons have many many wives in there lifetime not just 1 or 5 lol. Also his wives should be of varrying ages from young to older than his parents but they should be beautiful. Also don’t make him scared of his wives for finding new woman he a dragon lol. No yuri among wives please.
The rewrite isn’t that good it’s very uninteresting tbh you should keep the original story and chapters and go from there
To see which one is better.