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Cody_Voyles_45791yrCommentedCh 66 66 - Barbecue- Cody_Voyles_45791yrReplied to Heavenly_TerrorCh 5 CHAPTER - IV ( not edited )
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- Cody_Voyles_45791yrCommentedCh 21 Black Sword
- Cody_Voyles_45791yrCommentedCh 20 CHAPTER 20
- Cody_Voyles_45791yrCommentedCh 5 Chapter 3
- Cody_Voyles_45791yrCommented
My guy. Not trying to be rude or anything, but use exclamation points (!). When the characters are yelling and you don’t use one it makes it seem very monotone (emotionless). But also be careful not to use too many. Just trying give a fellow writer some advice.
Ch 15 Killing the Dragon - Cody_Voyles_45791yrCommentedCh 27 CHAPTER 27(First Date)
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NEVER!!!!!
I continued with my testing, but no fire related things because, you know, forest and that, but I found out that I can make flying slashes with my destroyers hands when I put enough Mana into it. It desintregrates anything in the forest that is hit with it. And that teleport skill is extremely cool. Just imagine what a badass entrance I can make. I ripp open a rift in space that also appears at the location where I will come out again - Cody_Voyles_45792yrCommented
personally i would've gone with the fundamental forces
After giving it some thought, I decided on Lucifer as I don't have to kill the target to get its skill. The stomach ability od Beelzebuth is pretty useless to me as I have the Invetory function. - Cody_Voyles_45792yrCommented
i claim this line
"Smooth~" - Cody_Voyles_45792yrReplied to corndog56
you will claim the dot and I will rule the words. together we shall have a great kingdom!!
"Ok, I am ready." Today is the day I waited so long for. I am finally gonna join a magic knight squad and go on adventures! I am still thinking about what squad I should join. Black Bulls is an option I thought hard about and I decided, even if I like this squad the most, I am gonna join a higher-ranked one. It will be way faster to become the Wizard King and I probably will get even more money and respect. - Cody_Voyles_45792yrCommented
I claim this line as my own
"Let's dye this world~ - Cody_Voyles_45792yrCommented
this one as well
I continued with my testing, but no fire related things because, you know, forest and that, but I found out that I can make flying slashes with my destroyers hands when I put enough Mana into it. It desintregrates anything in the forest that is hit with it. And that teleport skill is extremely cool. Just imagine what a badass entrance I can make. I ripp open a rift in space that also appears at the location where I will come out again - Cody_Voyles_45792yrCommented
i claim this paragraph as mine
"Okay time to test my skills, that -50% efficiency isn't anything to worry about thanks to the skills I got. Now then...hehehe" I took out my Grimoire that was stored in my Inventory and then it started glowing as it opened and the pages flipped - Cody_Voyles_45792yrReplied to Idlawyl
meh, I'm used to being an IT anyways.
'This child is really strong, it is trying its best to not cry and even looks to the ground so I can't see his sad face' - Cody_Voyles_45792yrReplied to SaphyChu
that is absolutely adorable
1. Beginning of a shit day - Cody_Voyles_45792yrPosted
i honestly love it. it is definitely a good story and i can see it going places. the MC is not very dull, oblivious, or dense. he has a pretty good relationship with everyone. the only thing that's missing is bell being there and the MC being like a big brother figure to him. otherwise it is a great story and i cant wait to see where you take it author-kun.
- Cody_Voyles_45792yrCommentedCh 48 Upgrade Pt. 2