I look forward to every time you update. So don’t let the haters get you down. Your story is great. You just keep doing what you’re doing. Authors who are consistently updating like you are will always have my respect. While I might not enjoy all of their stories, I enjoy yours.

I like the story. Yeah you can improve, but in all honesty everybody can improve. When you stop improving, you become stagnant. It's better to just keep writing. As far as criticism goes, only listen to the ones where they specifically mention what they thought you got wrong. Those are the ones that are genuinely trying to help you. Even then, if you don't agree, then you don't have to do anything. It's your story. Do what you feel is right for your story.

You know what you should do with the arrays that he is going to learn is t he stuff that the eternals do in the movie. Most of these powers have these glowing type glyphs to activate. He could probably do the same. Just and idea. I've enjoyed the story so far so I trust you to write well.

RWBY I think would be better between the two.

Harry crow was my intro too

Thanks for the update

I enjoy the premise of the story more than anything. I don't get many star wars and marvel crossovers like this. If the story continues this way I think it will be quite popular