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Izel_Blade3yrPostedThe way you described what is happening "in-game" is commendable. As a gamer myself, I can say that it's true to life. You explained the mechanics really well. It is important that it is somehow explained to the reader so that they will understand what the MC is doing and why he is doing it. It's good to see that the MC isn't sociable irl but has friends in-game. I love the poems that the MC wrote for *someone*. They are carefully written and you could feel the emotion. The way the MC describes a person is well written too. There were grammar lapses throughout the story and that should be fixed. The subject-verb agreement part. Although, I must say that I cringe at the first few chapters. I mean the "having crush" and "having a gf" part. I understand that people have different tastes in romance and represent different personalities so I buckled in and read through that. đđđ It must be a necessary part of the story. I am hoping that the MC will mature through the plots.
- Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Good, now you can avoid your suspicious gf or whatever creature it is
Did I just go back in time? - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Block her and that's it. Consult me for more logical advise.
But if I plan to get over this pain... or is it really fine to look again to get over? Or will it be just worse in the long run? - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Dude, you are so young, duh!
Where did my usual complacency and eagerness to live the day go? - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Eew
LittleHunter [saying farewell.....] - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
I think this person is grabbing photos from a lewd Cosplayer or IG model or something.
It was an image of her without underwear, and only wore a shirt. That very shirt was lifted up to her neck and her hand covered less than half of her breasts that were larger than her hand, which made me barely saw what color was underneath. - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
I wouldn't go for that kind of girl if I were you, kid.
Of course it made me happy, but it was just so sudden! - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Eew. Begone, thot.
LittleHunter [I'm not wearing bra right now] - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Sana all sinesendan ng poem
With that..... I clicked on the Send button. - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Could you talk some more sense to your friend please?
"You're still in love after all that?" He asked as I kept the note in my pocket. - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
At least your ex told you real time. My ex didn't. Lol
"WAKE UP! Don't lose HOPE!" - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Yes. Invest in yourself instead.
"Should I just study instead?" - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Because kids don't take relationships seriously as you do. Told ya
"Fuck. Why?" - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Me too Aiden, me too. Could you punch him please?
"Man. I can't say anything." - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Stupid boy. You are too young and naive.
"Yep, I did it. The mood was so good in that place, so I asked her to marry me." - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Okay, I might have to leave a review for this book because I like the poem. đ
That's only for you..... - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Sus
StarQuincy09 [and forgot to switch accounts] - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
wtf
StarQuincy09 [LittleHunter] - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Can I have this MC as my bf? I would love to get that kind of item. đ
I couldn't get any cosmetics that could change appearance like face and hairstyles because you need to 'donate' to the server to get those things..... - Izel_Blade3yrCommented
Okay, let's add that to the list "people I won't date or marry" *someone who tells their friend or playmate that he is getting laid Yep
"Dude's really getting laid? Seriously, how old is he?"