Am I suppose to be reading English via bad typing or code. Either way it is not what I would call a great reading experience for a story that I was truly enjoying.

the story captured, and lead on a journey through the lives of many all of which encouraged your investment in their lives. the imagination used to give structure to this story was excellent

the whole story was beyond expectations. I am not a reader that likes really long stories but from the first capital letter to the last full stop I was captured without any wish to escape.

thank you for the story and thank you for the quotes. writing is a gift you have been given and you are using it well

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola