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Xerx_Lugner

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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner2yr
    Commented

    The grammar in this chapter gave me hemorrhoids.

    Ch 1 Reigning Queen
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    A Serenade for the Innocent
    Horror · blairehawthorne
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner2yr
    Commented

    Even after learning the hardships of the world, she still decides to blame her mom. At this point, she is too far gone for any redemption. She doesn't deserve a mother.

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    我正在服用
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner2yr
    Commented

    What is the mc a girl?

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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner2yr
    Replied to bat_ovs

    Femenists don't enjoy anything anyway.

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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Posted

    Just excellent. The best novel to date for comedy and romance combined. Gives you real life skills/technicals so that YOU can achieve something as well.

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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Well there goes the author ruining the book.

    Ch 69 Chapter 69
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    Never Judge
    Realistic · wounded_warrior
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Smelling traces of NTR.

    Ch 19 Chapter 19
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    Never Judge
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Is the demon going to be Miyuki? She is sus.

    Ch 77 Epic skill - Divine Line Generator
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Posted

    A pretty interesting story that has no updates and is slowly killing itself due to the inactivity by the author. I am sorry for the bad review but let me give you some advice. 1. PROOFREAD. This series needs a good proofreader who can fix the grammar and sentence structure because it horrible in some parts the story. Get a good friend and then try to go through the story. 2. I am hopeful about this one but the story is still a highschool one (internally sighs). I hope the author creates vibrant characters that are NOT cliche. Especially the female ones since they are the most rushed and overlooked ones. 3. Please keep the romance realistic as possible. PLEASE!

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    Birthrights
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Bros before hoes.

    Ch 8 Chuunibyou
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    Adopted Soldier
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Did my man just get FRIENDZONED?! what the hell author-kun?!

    Ch 7 Restart of their first meeting
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    Adopted Soldier
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Bro's before hoes. Anthony x Ben best team!

    Ch 34 Wingman law
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Smash his balls in!

    Ch 20 The crucial moment
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    My Pick Up Artist System
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    I wish I could have those gains

    Ch 9 Swole daddy
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    My Pick Up Artist System
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Remember, rejection is a lesson while acceptance is a trial.

    Ch 6 We're stuck in caveman bodies
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Damn, a thong. Atleast we get to see him improve.

    Ch 4 The thong test
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Why did I get second-rate embarrassment from reading this chapter? Time to get a charm demon for myself....

    Ch 3 Casanova enters the scene
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    My Pick Up Artist System
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  • Xerx_Lugner
    Xerx_Lugner3yr
    Commented

    Z Z Z z z

    Ch 2 Divine Pick Up Line
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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