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Im4x_sk1ll13hReplied to tristancalmbtw just a question: when reading were there any problems with the story? like do the first chapters need some revising?
"*Hmmm... if this ability of mine can replicate my avatars..." He wondered for a bit before he swiped up his finger. The next moment, a holographic screen appeared before his face and was in awe because he couldn't believe what he was seeing, "No way...!"- Im4x_sk1ll20hReplied to IcelingCh 16 SS 3: The Moonlight Sonata
- Im4x_sk1ll20hReplied to Iceling
well, to make things clear I said in Chapter 11 that having Ben, Asta, and Issei (at the end of season 4) can clear a lot of worlds. coupled with the chat group, they'd get a lot stronger so there'd be no tension if we're being honest here. That's why I decided to add another chat group who'd act in opposition to Ben's. So there will be four side stories to show to show how they joined in whereas the Admin would be revealed at the end of the Kyoto arc in the main story. Hope this thing cleared things up for you.
Ch 16 SS 3: The Moonlight Sonata - Im4x_sk1ll1dReplied to Dissapointed_One
If you read Sis-con with Dimensional Chat Group and Annihilation Maker DxD you'd know what I'm talking about. For a time it became a common trope within that era of fanfics but people started dropping theirs due to the lack of commitment and overall difficulty to write such a thing.
A.N: So this idea of mine came on a whim and after thinking about it for awhile, it could turn into an actual good story if I don't flop it. If you guys don't know what are Chat Groups about, it's basically a pseudo Gamer's System that you can buy some items in its store and rewards you for missions that would assign to the Group. And as the "Dimension" part suggests, we'll mostly be on other dimensions/worlds in the story. - Im4x_sk1ll1dReplied to Dissapointed_One
Did you pay attention to the time when it was written? 💀 and yeah it's understandable cuz I was a dumb highschool kid at that time
[(everyone minus Asta): Right.] - Im4x_sk1ll1dReplied to Dissapointed_One
It's based on those Chat Group fics which were once very popular around three or four years ago. I wrote the first chapter at that time. Couldn't continue writing for IRL reasons until I managed to do so recently.
A.N: So this idea of mine came on a whim and after thinking about it for awhile, it could turn into an actual good story if I don't flop it. If you guys don't know what are Chat Groups about, it's basically a pseudo Gamer's System that you can buy some items in its store and rewards you for missions that would assign to the Group. And as the "Dimension" part suggests, we'll mostly be on other dimensions/worlds in the story. - Im4x_sk1ll1dReplied to Dissapointed_One
will do
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it's not like everyone who's reading this is a fan of Ben 10 so I put that there just in case. Also you won't see the little info dump for OG aliens in the later chapters.
FourArms: One of Ben's original 10 transformations when he first unlocked the Omnitrix; and as it's name suggests, this Alien gives Ben four arms that can pack a very mean punch with a very monstrous strength included. - Im4x_sk1ll1dReplied to IcelingCh 16 SS 3: The Moonlight Sonata
- Im4x_sk1ll3dReplied to tristancalm
Not quite, though the first one sounds cool if I'm being honest. I'll I can say is that not only it's thematic, but it's quite symbolic as well when it gets revealed.
...$h@0!4 04 F@¥e...] - Im4x_sk1ll3dReplied to tristancalm
yeah that's about it :) btw hope you're enjoying the fic!
"*Hmmm... if this ability of mine can replicate my avatars..." He wondered for a bit before he swiped up his finger. The next moment, a holographic screen appeared before his face and was in awe because he couldn't believe what he was seeing, "No way...!" - Im4x_sk1ll4dReplied to tristancalm
You're reallyyyy close. I'll give you a hint: It starts with "Sha" not "Sho" I'll see myself out.
...$h@0!4 04 F@¥e...] - Im4x_sk1ll4dReplied to SonicAxl
💀 didn't thought somebody might guess correct
Unbeknownst to Ben, he already repaid the boy just by being there; and it'll certainly come back to bite him and his friends' asses in the far future. - Im4x_sk1ll4dReplied to tristancalm
Well, when I explain stuff I trynna be thorough without giving any spoilers ^^
"*Hmmm... if this ability of mine can replicate my avatars..." He wondered for a bit before he swiped up his finger. The next moment, a holographic screen appeared before his face and was in awe because he couldn't believe what he was seeing, "No way...!" - Im4x_sk1ll4dReplied to tristancalm
not really though I had a chuckle when reading the benio part. But I'm curious about PS-CR here cuz I couldn't come up with anything :)
[Ben10: Hi guys this is Ben10 here! A fellow teenage superhero, wielder of the Omnitrix, savior of the galaxy and a bunch of times saving the universe. Apparently this chat group invited us for unknown reasons I still don't know, but I think it's better to introduce ourselves to get to know each other better.] - Im4x_sk1ll4dReplied to tristancalm
Big Chill
[Necrofriggian DNA (B+)] - Im4x_sk1ll4dReplied to tristancalm
He's in the real world rn getting himself ready to go to DxD. But if you meant his powers, his power essentially makes him a game character in the real world by accessing all of his avatars that he created in the VR games; regardless of that game's servers getting shut down. So his current avatars are now: SAO, AlO, GGO. And later there would be a more further in-depth explanation about the secret of his power about why it's functioning the way it is. hope it satisfied you man :)
"*Hmmm... if this ability of mine can replicate my avatars..." He wondered for a bit before he swiped up his finger. The next moment, a holographic screen appeared before his face and was in awe because he couldn't believe what he was seeing, "No way...!" - Im4x_sk1ll4dReplied to tristancalm
Yeah I wanna go the martial artist route with Asta
[You received 1 Impurity Cleansing Pill.] - Im4x_sk1ll4dReplied to tristancalm
pfft 😂
[Ben10: Hi guys this is Ben10 here! A fellow teenage superhero, wielder of the Omnitrix, savior of the galaxy and a bunch of times saving the universe. Apparently this chat group invited us for unknown reasons I still don't know, but I think it's better to introduce ourselves to get to know each other better.]